"What could possibly go wrong?"
Drake Winchester, adventurer, archaeologist, millionaire, ladies man, the list goes on. Drake Winchester has been in mexico for three months now, digging up possibly, no, The greatest find in his career. But what he finds in the illusive Temple will change his life forever.
Seconds person Human/Daring
A/N: I really wanted to write this, I have had the idea for weeks and I finally started writing, so here it is.
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It kind of lacks emotion at the end of this chapter... I mean, sure, they're just talking, but without adding any facial features or body language the most we can do is imagine that they're standing stiff as a statue without expressing any emotion at all.
Fun fact: Body language makes up 55 percent of communication.
Don't forget it.
It's spelled Daring Do
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That's what the imagination is for.... Just saying...
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So it is... I'll fix later
*Lifetime
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So what you're saying is that I should imagine what happens in your story.
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No you read my story, but if there are any blanks you can fill them.
its called IMAGINATION!
don't you picture shit in your mind when you read?
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Yes, I always picture the story in my mind when I read.
What I want to know is why you're leaving blanks in the story?
You're descriptive one minute then the next minute you just stop.
That's like you walking down a path in the forest with autumn leaves and chirping birds, then, outta nowhere, you fall into a hole.
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Hey man, I'm only human.
I don't leave blanks on purpose. I'm saying if there is any you know what to do.
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That's kind of why I commented in the first place, to make sure you know that there are blanks so you can work on it.
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And don't joke about that Shit!
It Really hurt!
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Joke about what?
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I was once walking through a forest and fell into a BIG ass hole.
IT HURT SO BAD!
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Did you yell out "Team Rocket!" when someone came to help?
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What are you six?
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No sense was made this day