Trail Blazer and his daughter Comet Trail move to Ponyville to start their new lives. Trail has been all around Equestria for his job, but he wants Comet to have a home of her own. And after Comet found a flier for a certain Princesses’ school, how could he deny her?
What new adventures await them in the quiet little town of Ponyville? Can Trail give Comet the home she's always wanted? And can Trail find happiness as well? Let's find out!
Featured on 5/31/20
Editors:
Myself
Mister Hypothetical
Frag the Editor
Cover Art by the amazingly talented Aurelia Charm of Raspberry Studios
Chapters (44)
So far so good.
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Thank you. Glad you like it.
Interesting, I'll keep an eye on this.
This raises an interesting point in my mind, has Twilight put Cheerilee out of a job? Or is Twilight's school more of a finishing school? If the young'un doesn't have her mark yet, she might be too young for Twilight's academy thingy.
Nice story
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Comet is around the Crusader's age, and she is a bit of a late bloomer with her cutie mark. As for Twilight's school, I personally think it comes down to what they are going for in the school. Cheerlie is for general education, while Twilight is focused on friendship. Comet has little to no friends, and saw Twilight's school as an opportunity. And I wouldn't say she is too young, Cozy Glow is the around the Crusader's age, and she was attending the school.
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Thank you
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Your welcome
Well, if you're going to Ponyville then you're lives are definetly going to become... interesting
Does Spoiled still live there ?
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Oh things are definitely going to get interesting for our new residents.
And don't worry, Trail has dealt with far worse than Spoiled my friend.
Of course you haven't, she is The Pink One, The True Mistress of Pink no matter what Cadance might say BOW BEFORE THE PINK ONE
This is good, i like it
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Thank you. I’m glad you’re enjoying it.
I really like how you’re letting the setting tell it’s story rather than explicitly telling us. Keep that up.
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Thank you. I'm glad you're enjoying it. It really makes my day.
Good chapter Hades, nice work.
If the main OCs in this story were voiced, what would they sound like?
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Trail would sound Southern but not exaggerated. And Comet would be about a mix of Applebloom and Ocellus
Ok, so far I'm liking what I've read. Can't wait to see Trail and Zecora's interaction with each other.
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Glad you're liking it. I don't know, it's a big forest, maybe Trail won't run into Zecora 😏
Nice one, high-grade work for a come-back chapter, Hades.
Also, good work on the editing considering you did it yourself—there are fewer errors than I would have anticipated. You're improving.
😏
Nice chapter
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Thanks. ^^
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Apple Bloom is two words. Also, isn't there already a character in the actual show named Comet Trail?
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Alright, the Apple Bloom thing is my bad. Also, no the pony in the show is called Comet Tail.
Nice story
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Thank you
When will the next chapter come out
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I’ll be getting ready for BronyCon for the next week. I hope to have the next chapter out no later than Mid-August.
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Thanks
Ahh. Good to see a new chapter out after so long. It's still as good as I remember, keep it up, Hades.
To make sure there is no confusion, I have decided to change Comet's age to around the age of the Student Six, to make their connection feel more genuine. Previously I stated that she was the age of the crusaders, but after some thought, it felt odd to have her connect with the student six who are older.
Her lack of a cutie mark at this age is rare but not impossible and will be a major part of her plotline.
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I meant in terms of voice actors.
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To be perfectly honest, I'm not sure. I know a lot of the voice acting community but can't really place one for these two characters
Loving it, looking forward to the next chapter
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I'm so glad you're enjoying it
Ok, this right here is really awkward to read...
Seriously? Trail Blazer is gonna give Rainbow Crash a run for her money if you insist on making him collide with half the ponies in Ponyville.
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But it's so funny XD
Honestly looking now, I didn't really intend for it to keep happening. It just did
No need to rush! I’m always happy when an occasional update from this story comes
You know I always find the Canterlot nobility's attitude interesting.
Since unicorns are, essentially, the most expendable pony tribe ever since Celestia and Luna took over oving the sun and moon.
That is to say, in Equestria's modern society they really don't do anything that members of the other tribes can't.
It has been awhile but that's okay, real life can be a pain sometimes. No problem at all.
I don't know if its my gut feeling or not but why do I feel that something nasty and serious is going to happen between Comet and Tourmaline at some point in the future. Now I could be wrong but...
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Oh it's just a typical schoolyard interaction.
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Good to know, I quite like Comet and I hope she does well. I still do want Tourmaline to get what's coming to him eventually though, but that line of thought is due to my own experience with bullies during my school years.
Yay! Great chapter!
ch.3 and ch.6 have you introducing ocatavia, or two different octavias at least
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Oh shit, I didn't notice that. Whoops XD
I'll fix that. No clue how I did that
Me when reading literally all of this chapter: oh, thats neat and cute and ... wait a minute...
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Lol. Why whatever do you mean?
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why nothing....
Regarding Comet's mother, my best guess is she left Trail and Comet for somepony (or creature) else or they parted on less than good terms. Either way I would guess she broke their hearts quite badly.
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I've been leaving clues and hints about her. She will be important later. A nice theory though