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Lord Despair


I am hate, I am fear, I am sorrow, I am DESPAIR!!!!!!!!

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The Everfree forest.

It is a blemish upon the beautiful face that is Equestria. They say that it is a land shrouded in chaos, where the plants, the weather, and the denizens of the forest themselves all act on their own accord. It is commonly regarded as a place of evil, for the natural laws of Equestria do not apply to it.

While most tend to steer clear of the accursed forest, one too many accidents within it have prompt the need to finally remove the Everfree once and for all. The princesses, in response to the request of ponies as well as their own opinions, have opted to have every inch of the Everfree cut down for the creation of a new settlement on the grounds of environmental preservation and research.

It has been three months since a logging crew had been dispatched to deal with the problem. Most of the team never returned to report their progress, and those who have were forever haunted by what they had experience...

Original Author Zelkova48
Adopted by Lord Despair


featured on May 12 2016

Chapters (8)
Comments ( 134 )

Don't f@#k with nature. And also cool story.

Hundreds of Timberwolves vs Princess Twilight...
I'll be real honest here; I'm not sure who'd win that fight.

Yup, that's what you get for trying to rape Mother Nature, I just hope that humans learn the same lesson one day.

2912270 Twilight can hold her own given her magical prowess and skill, but once those wolves go for the throat, it'll be like watching a cow walk into a piranha infest river. But no hate on the princess, just saying

Ah good to see nature fighting back.

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by the way good story hope to see more keep up the good work.:twilightsmile:

I assumed Zecora would take the side of the Everfree. It´s a true subversion, the fact she seems to see the forest in the same light than the ponies.
Poor Fluttershy. All of these years as a caretaker, and still hadn´t figure out Mother Nature is a bitch.:fluttershbad:

2916154 I kinda assumed that everyone was afraid of the forest, given how unnatural it is with clouds moving on the own and whatnot. The mane six even express how terrifying it is on multiple occasion to the point of exaggerated ridiculousness.

Even if it is Zecora's home, that place is crawling with carnivorous creatures

Docile Timberwolves that won’t hurt anypony! Imagine how they can help us in our everyday lives!”

while most Everfree creature (Manticores, Cockatrices, Hydras and even Ursas) have at least some level of sentience the Timberwolves are nothing but brutal, unbridled instinct. Possibly due to the fact that they are at least part plant.

really? you mess with mother nature your going to get burned and fail or die

ok...i'm convinced that Discord has something to do with the state of the Everfree. I mean he is the embodiment of chaos and was around long before the ponies, just like what the mushroom said about the Everfree, and once Discord was imprisoned well, all that chaos magic had to collect somewhere right?

2983892 who knows, maybe the Everfree existed much much longer than all of that, even for the embodiment of Chaos himself.

Celestia offered freedom from a doomed existence but they will find no salvation in this forest.
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also, when do the other mushroom tribes become involved? there were two more.

2985609 this isn't exactly a true mushroom men cross over, but the other tribes will show up when the going gets tough

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i am looking forward to seeing what the lepiotas have in store for the little bastards.
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The mushroom in question was around two inches tall, and was humanoid shaped

Has Twilight already come back from Canterlot High?

3094830 nah, it's just like a tiny mushroom man

I want to know what happens next XD

KILL THEM KILL THEM ALL!!! SHOW THEM THE TRUE FORCE OF NATURE!!!

2915954 I know right? Those idiots think they make the rules of nature. Can't wait to see them learn how insignificant they really are.

They could end up like Varus and his three legions if they are not careful.

so when the next chapter is coming out

5730467 not sure, been busy with my job for a while now

5730884 that understandable work comes first after all but will be wait for the chap when its done

Even i don't like it when nature is controlled. Loses all the good stuff I like about nature. Show them that nature was never a little bitch to ever even begin with. No matter how much magic they have. The real natural forces will tear them a new one.

Is it dead y? n? I like so pls not be Dead

Did everypony forget about Ursa Majors when they were deforesting the Everfree? img14.deviantart.net/1377/i/2011/209/1/8/wrath_of_the_ursa_major_by_virus_91-d41wpq7.jpg
I also would like the king to explain that the element didn't work because they were made in the Everfree, and are actually called the Elements of Nature

Comment posted by Necron Lord deleted May 12th, 2016

If you are planning to re -write the whole thing, please try to change some of the... less desirable aspects of the fic: anvilicious green aesop, giving ponies the idiot ball, OC Twilight, guardians of the forest acting and chatting like your average jerk neighbour, etc...
Please, try to expose both sides, Civilization vs Nature, in a more Grey vs Gray morality perspective perspective, you know, Mononoke style.

7209628 I'll put that in consideration

Keep up the flow of the story. Twilight, being self righteous which is understandable for pony xenophobes. The fact that they also have different views on the forest is acting a a barrier for quick understandings. For the ponies to understand the situation here, they must see it through the effects that they are inducing from their acts to the animals. The ponies have lived life controlling the aspects of nature, mostly. And thinking that non-sentient life forms needs help and domestication because they do not understand the nature of... Well, balance of nature. The ponies will merely put the blame on 'the forest being evil because it's an unknown' because it is, for them. They have lived in an environment where everything has pony all over it. Down with pony over self righteousness complex.

Comment posted by grammar404 deleted May 13th, 2016

Okay get on with it damn it, enough of the stalling crap like you all seem to think is nice and a good thing to do.

It's not.

7211094 what? what you are talking about? I just adopted the fic today! I haven't even gotten start on writing yet

I personally think this should be a "Fault of Pride" story. The fact that Ponies believe themselves to be the ones who can dictate what Nature can and cannot do. By attacking the Everefree they attack the planet's will and soon this causes them to suffer. They slowly begin to lose their ability to control nature, weather, and even the sun and moon. Disease, famine, creatures, the weather all cause Equestria to suffer as lives are lost and Twilight becomes obsessed with destroying the Everfree only to lose in the end. In the end, nature takes control of itself again and ponies are forced to adapt to a world where their magic no longer controls everything.

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I can give you more details when I come back from work if you want

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