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Pure Note

"What could possibly go wrong?"

Pure Note Joined 4th Dec, 2012 · Offline

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This isn't your typical Human story. You actually live a decent life, until you brother is murdered and the man who killed him is now after you, now after a week of running and hiding this game of cat and mouse is over.

Or is it...

Human/Twi 2nd person romance

A/N: First story just an idea I had that evolved into a different idea.
also this wont be high on my priority list so... i'll do it in my spare time.

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Chapters (6)
Incomplete Published: Dec 5th, 2012 Download
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Pure Note
Pure Note #1 · Dec 5th, 2012 · · · Chapter Two: Rude awakening ·
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Criticism and grammar/spelling checks welcome :twilightsmile:

The Escaped Phyco Hero
The Escaped Phyco Hero #3 · Dec 5th, 2012 · · · Chapter one: Grand tour ·
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I will read this later. For now, I slumber.

Pixels
Pixels #4 · Dec 5th, 2012 · · · Chapter one: Grand tour ·
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This isn't your typical Human story

Yeah yeah heard it a mill-

You actually live a decent life, until you brother is murdered and the man who killed him is now after you, now after a week of running and hiding this game of cat and mouse is over.
Or is it...

…
Wha*head asplode*

Pure Note
Pure Note #7 · Dec 5th, 2012 · · · Chapter one: Grand tour ·
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1743093

I know right, a human sent to equestria who's life didn't totally suck.

Pixels
Pixels #8 · Dec 6th, 2012 · · · Chapter one: Grand tour ·
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1746671
Actually, it was more this that surprised me:

until you brother is murdered and the man who killed him is now after you, now after a week of running and hiding this game of cat and mouse is over.

Pixels
Pixels #10 · Dec 6th, 2012 · · · Chapter one: Grand tour ·
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1746933
No, just over the top.
Also, *too.

Pure Note
Pure Note #11 · Dec 6th, 2012 · · · Chapter one: Grand tour ·
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1746946

One thing you'll find with me is there is no top.

And :facehoof:

Regidar
Regidar #15 · Dec 6th, 2012 · · · Chapter one: Grand tour ·
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1749317 Precisely, worm, your honor.

Dubstep Dash
Dubstep Dash #20 · Dec 7th, 2012 · · · Chapter Two: Rude awakening ·
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You may proceed to the next chapter

Pure Note
Pure Note #21 · Dec 7th, 2012 · · · Chapter Two: Rude awakening ·
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1753665

I just posted a new one so... you'll have too wait.

Teslakana
Teslakana #28 · Aug 17th, 2013 · · · Chapter Four: Under the Stars ·
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you had me going there for a minute! :trollestia:

JPinkerton52
JPinkerton52 #29 · Aug 18th, 2013 · · · Chapter Two: Rude awakening ·
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You know if you didn't add that authors note I wouldn't be a sick minded bastard :flutterrage:, but great story though!! :twilightsmile:

Anyne
Anyne #31 · Mar 9th, 2014 · · · Chapter 5: Babysitting. ·
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“Were Bored!” Her orange companion groaned, trotting up to join her yellow friend

They were bored:rainbowhuh:

Anyne
Anyne #33 · Mar 9th, 2014 · · · Chapter 5: Babysitting. ·
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4057987 I think you wanted her to say "We're bored"

Neildoc
Neildoc #35 · May 4th, 2015 · · · Chapter Three: Meet the Trio ·
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about the monkey, why not? humans and monkeys are both primates. humans
are at the top of primate chain. very cute indeed.

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