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Night--Mist


Son of Princess Luna. A Bat Pony Alicorn who's small for his age.

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Luna has called Applejack to the Crystal Empire for something that she needs her for. What Applejack finds out will change her life if she goes through with it. Rated Teen to be safe. Sidequel/sequel to The Royal Crystal Family, Always Calm is Flutter's Mom, Pinkie Pie Cake, and A Miscalculation Gone Cute.
Links to all the connected stories of this one:
A New Style For The Most Fashonable Pony
The Royal Crystal Family
Always Calm is Flutter's Mom
Pinkie Pie Cake
A Miscalculation Gone Cute.

Attention!!! Attention!!! This is not a test........This is an Emergency Cuteness Transmission (ECT)......... Age regression, Breastfeeding, Diapers and Cuddly Cuteness involved......... Do not read if story strays from your comfort zone or is too cute......... This message will stay posted as long as possible.

Chapters (3)
Comments ( 85 )

Sounds pretty good so far

Good premise, but you definitely need to work on your commas.

This is building up to be yet another cute story and so far so good.
The only problem I have with it is the fact that you brought someone back from the dead. It's your story so you can do whatever you want, but there are somethings that should never be tempered with.

Another wonderful story starting off. I can't wait to see our foalified mane six all together. :heart:

Looks like that joke's real. :ajbemused:

Nice chapter, but I found some things you may want to edit.

"I'll bet your head over hooves to see us again aren't ya Applejack?"

That should be "you're".

"Why can't the high speed one take off for there tomorrow yer highness," Apple Cobbler asked.

That should be a question mark.

Her took her neckerchief and adjusted it to where Applejack could be carried inside it, and Apple Turnover thanked him.

And that should be "He". Still, this is an interesting story and I look forward to seeing more.

Her took her neckerchief and adjusted it to where Applejack could be carried inside it, and Apple Turnover thanked him. Soon the Apple Family and Luna walked out of the room to take care of what they needed, unaware two other ponies had just been permanently foalified.

permanently?:twilightoops: ahh caa-rap:facehoof: why am I thinking Big Mac and Applebloom? this could get so bad, SO quick:pinkiesick:

also SO looking forwar to this:pinkiehappy:

Back to the foal hood the price for bring somepony to life again? The fact the pony need to achieve something first, mmmmmmmmmmmmmmm, i think it´s a small price. But if AJ is going to loose all her memories, "giving his actual life" i think is more appropriate. (FMA Principle of Equivalence, if my memory is good)

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It's not Big Mac and Apple Bloom. If you read the stories linked to this one, it should tell you who they are.... oops, forgot to say what stories are linked.

3708780 I have never brought someone back who was completely dead. Or have I?

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Hey, it's not like I am gonna make the parents evil or bossy. This story is suppose to be cute, with a little comedy thrown in.

3709771 I would never expect that from you. I just threw a piece of my mind into the comment.
Still I hope there is some kind of drawback to them being brought back to life. Other then Applejack turning into a foal.

Oh, my. Perhaps that is what you have been planning along. Clever girl. (Or I might be completely wrong.)

Keep the awesome stories coming. my friend. :raritystarry:

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Um, did you just throw in a Jurassic Park punch line in there?

I would've embed links into the sequels/side stories...you know so your readers aren't chuckling around like crazed :scootangel:

Comment posted by Fishy Sushi deleted Jan 7th, 2014

3713470 Well perhaps I have. I'm not entirely sure though.

I'm sorry to break this to you, Night--Mist, but this pony here: puu.sh/65DlH.jpg is Apple Cobbler. A female and living member of the apple family. She is found multiple times in the series. That picture was taken from here: static4.wikia.nocookie.net/__cb20121222153805/mlp/images/b/be/The_Apple_Family_together_S3E08.png
In the 8th episode of season 3.
Not hatin' just statin!
I like the story alot!

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Well, I couldn't think of a name that seemed male enough to fit the father aside from Apple Cobbler.

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Thanks, nice to hear from you again, it was almost like you vanished.

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No my computer was just broke and i had to get it fixed but now i'm okay and i'll be going back to work on my stories.

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That's good. Oh, Have read my blog I recently put out?

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Well I am looking into having Co-Authors for any of my stories. If you are interested, you can be one, that's if you want to. Pardon if I'm going a little Fluttershyish here:twilightblush:.

3716860 I'm sorry if that coment sounded a little rude.... :fluttercry:

NightMist, are you working on a new chapter?:pinkiehappy:

3743426 Yes, but you have to give me time.

3745774 :facehoof: what the heck? Anyways, I will wait.:pinkiecrazy:

I want chapter! :applecry: It's too hard to wait...:twilightoops::applecry:

3799529 he is taking a brake he has only a little time each day that is why he has some co authors helping him I am helping him with pinkie pie cake so can you wait a little bit longer you will not regret it :twilightsmile:

3830269 thank you for you support wall time goes by try reading his other story's like pinkie pike cake which I am helping him wright right now Message me or him for more information

I do not think thiss will end well for elements of harmony

Omfg the mist lives.... It really fucking lives!!... Sweet! Welcome back... I'm surprised you updated this one ...

And Luna was with the apple family??

Granny was the first to get the message as she scooted everyone into the kitchen, including the Princess

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I thought the princess was in another castle.... Erm I mean talking to celestia?

3940048 Did I say that? (reads through the two chapters) Nope I didn't say that. I think you must have gotten mixed up somewhere in the story...... Oh wait, I see what you did there. You sly fox, er, I mean, changeling.

3940059 now the changeling is confused....... Derp. But yeah... Why is the princess in the apple house. F*cling magical stalker.......... Why would she come with anyway?? Derp.... Dur due dur derrrrrrp!

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