Start of the story: this is gonna be awesome! Then it just spiraled down into a bunch of short clops with little depth. Not a bad story, but not a good one either. Average.

good idea for a clopfic... you don't mind if i might write one based on this do ya?

I mean: Spike transforms into 6 different versions of himself, all aged and adjusted to be perfectly suited for each of the pony friends... that's an excellent idea...

473909
Please save this idea from me, this was just awful and needs to be redone by a real writer.

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you give me too much credit i not spell can english worth sh*t... and grammar
but I mostly thought that the idea coincides with my previous story: "The Tails of Spike's Harem" - Spike shipps with EVERYONE (plus i still can't find most spike&other like guilda without it being rape)

475005
Is there anything at all with gilda that isn't rape of some sort?
Anyway go ahead it's not like this is copyrighted or anything and it wasn't popular so you won't have anyone yelling that you stole it or anything of the sort.

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well to be perfectly frank... unless you copyright the idea of the story (which there would be many loop-holes around it) there would only be an issue if i use your story or parts of your story without your permission... but i'd never do that

and either way i would've added an author's note saying basically "Inspired by 'The Seven Spikes' by Starkie"

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That's...very polite actually.
I'd like to read your version when it's done.

meh your cancelled story eclipse was better then this

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Best of friends.

Good... nope. Also how did I get here.

(read title) *this looks interesting*
(read description) (pick up jaw) "wow" *reading now*

edit. (read first chapter) *adding to faves.*

All I can do is shrug. It's not awful, but it could use a lot of work and polish. You've got a good frams and some meat on the skeleton, but it could do with some fleshing out.

Overall, I'd give it 6 out of 10.

Then why does it say 'incomplete?'