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Blissey1


I'm just a Blissey who likes ponies.

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Damn! That was a heck of a short sequel!

Hawt!

I liked the technical details, like the placement of chitin and skin on the changeling body. And the bit about Lyra being careful with her horn around the leg holes immediately made me think of what could happen if she weren't. :rainbowlaugh:

I came for the headcanon, not for the clop, and I was not disappointed.

Well... I enjoyed it. Stories like these are way more fun if there's something interesting in them besides the adult content :twilightsmile:

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D48 #5 · Jan 6th, 2014 · · ·

That was very good, although I think my favorite part of the story may have been the lessons learned in the author's note.

1. using Celestia's name in vain during sex can sound a lot like calling out the wrong name in bed if you're not careful. :trollestia:

This line made me laugh so hard. :rainbowlaugh:

Also, I would kind of like to see another chapter where someone heard Bon Bon as a stallion during sex and thought Lyra was cheating on her. The fallout from the "help" would be absolutely hilarious. :rainbowlaugh::facehoof:

Darn it, I thought this would be an actual sequel!

there is no way to refer to female sexual anatomy that does not sound either cold and clinical, extremely dirty, or overly flowery

Hoooooh boy are there ever some dirty names. To the point of being downright vulgur. But I know what you mean about the lacking of "tasteful" expressions for it.

"r63 (sort of)" != futa

Son I'm disappoint.

I have to ask can we get an official sequel to the story?

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well, while my changelings are technically futa, in pony form they can only only ever go as full male or full female. So I think the actual sex is more r63 than futa.


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I made a blog post about that

long story short, yes there will be a proper sequel, but not anytime soon.

Nice. Just letting you know: no matter if it's clop or not, I don't review one-shots. Just not enough there, you know? Also, is there to be a sequel? I know this is supposedly the side story/sequel, but I wouldn't mind a full sequel.

I love this

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marehood...there i just gave you one

1. using Celestia's name in vain during sex can sound a lot like calling out the wrong name in bed if you're not careful. :trollestia:

Yea imagine you doing Luna and you use Celestia's name in vain during sex! :twilightoops:

I really enjoyed it. I wouldn't mind sexy time in changeling form, while Lyra stimulates Bon Bom's changeling slit while they are engaging in intercourse. Hmm so sexy.

What a fascinating mix of headcannon and smut. Makes it sexier somehow. Eheh... actually... is it ok if I borrow some elements? Your headcannon on Changeling anatomy and life has made the most sense to me, right from the start of A Novel Tale.

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Foamy, I will always be surprised to find you anywhere. And yeah, I'll prolly comment to your stuff, even though it's like over a year old, stating my surprise that you're reading these same things I am. Oh, and the content. I'm especially surprised when I see you on clopfics. Not gonna lie, it's a bit baffling, but certain clopfics do the world building thing, so maybe I shouldn't be so surprised?

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just so long as you mention where you got it from, you can use any bit of my changeling headcannon you like! :raritywink:

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Sweet! Thanks! :pinkiehappy:

I have to say that i enjoyed this story vary much. The clop was good to. I have read storys where the Author did a pore job on such seen's.

Dragonfox

PS. you mite want to tag this story with a sex tag.

Nope nope nope so Mutch nope!!!

meh i think its good but i dont knoe

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That qualifies as flowery, my friend. Dodging the elephant in the room... pretty much always fingers out the exception. It becomes... painfully obvious you're cutting something short. Though I talk like it's beneath me.
Dang. I really should see a psychologist.

Short, sweet, I liked it.

And then Lyra whispered in Bon Bon's ear: can you, maybe, turn into a human?

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