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HumanFlea

HumanFlea #1 · Feb 3rd, 2014 · 2 · ·

Not enough good watersports here.
I liked seeing Octy getting down and dirty like that as well.

Little_Draco

Little_Draco #2 · Feb 3rd, 2014 · 1 · ·

There needs to be more with the story... im into water sports as much as the nxt guy but few actually have good stories. Make a good one with at least decent story line please.

Comment posted by ForeverFrisky deleted Feb 3rd, 2014

ForeverFrisky

ForeverFrisky #4 · Feb 3rd, 2014 · · ·

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Indeed! Secret fetishes are pretty fun!

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Ah, sorry. Story is something I'll probably have to work on a bit instead of getting right to the action. XD

One Trick Pony

One Trick Pony #5 · Feb 3rd, 2014 · 1 · ·

Well this was pretty exiting but I don't understand why you did not continue to write the second part.. overall it was just a bit short and though I understand that you only have a limited time frame within the story in which you can write the actual water sports I still feel it could have been a bit longer.. thumps up though because regardless of these things... we need MORE of this on Fimfic!