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No.....just.......no.
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I realise that there is an audience for this sort of thing though, so I'm going to thumb you up to balance out the thumbs down. Add it to the clopfic group, it will go down better there. As for now, I hope you're prepared for the negative reception that usually accompanies stories that delve into the less well-known fetishes.
416360: Just sayin...but agreed.
416360
This is my fourth time posting a urine-related fic on here, though this time the title is a little more questionable, nonsensical, and provocative than in my other fics. I've come to expect a lot of dislikes, though I hope some people will leave feedback along with their rating.
What... What did i read...
Like... i knew what it would kinda be... but it wasn't what i was expecting :(
I can't get them words back, somewhere in my subconscious are them words, floating around...
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Yes, I checked your profile just after posting that comment. I considered editing it, but the same message stands.
Mini-review:
The technical aspects of the story were spot-on. Good grammar and spelling, and sentence structure was also in good form.
The plot: Well, I'm a fan of clopfics, but not this particular fetish, so I cannot give you an unbiased opinion.
That's it for the mini-review.
Yes just yes, can't wait for the next part...
Edit: I just noticed that you are the writer of one of my favorite clopfics, Twilight's Watersport Inclination good on ya
This is..... I feel bad for liking it, lol.
No... way! I wrote a story about Rainbow Dash having a urine addiction! I had no idea that there was more of this idea floating around! Where did you get your inspiration? Now i'm going to read the story, because i know it's gonna be gewd!
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Hmm well the original idea for this fic came from one line about Fluttershy wetting herself at a surprise party that I included in my contribution to that 500+ chapter, anyone can contribute, choose your own adventure fetish fic on writing.com. Rainbow Dash getting turned on from it was a story element that was added later. (This is a revised version of my first clopfic I posted on ponyfiction archive in november 2011)
Why do I want more?
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416360 I don't know if watersports can be considered 'less well-known' I mean... Never mind, I wont go into that.
Either way, as to your story, I...Liked it? Not a big "Urine this together" kinda guy, in fact its a bit disturbing. But you made me laugh, wasent your intention. But it does net you a thumbs up!
416485 Facinating. I'm glad i found you, because this is more my style of comedy. I hope this story sky-rockets in popularity.
Great chapter!
My god
I'm so glad I started watching you
this platform would require a replacement of all head-based processing units
i mean like i've read several creepy as fuck pee fanfics but dear god this one is just like
it's just
raising the bar and staying as king of all mentally scarring and horrible pee-involving fanfics that some people will most certainly masturbate to
everyone step the fuck back
this is THE new scary; this is THE thing horror movies look up to
i'm holding my thumb back because i really can't decide. this is stunning, man.
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Don't do that to Fluttershy dude 
Well written.....but sweet Celestia I swear I'll never get used to seeing watersports associated with Ponies. It just doesn't add up. And why did it have to be Fluttershy
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I was actually shocked to find out how much you can associate watersports with ponies.
"When a mare is in heat, she must signal her readiness to the stallion for successful conception to occur. The mare does this by urinating in the stallion's presence and lifting her tail to expose her vulva. The stallion then sniffs the mare's urine to determine whether she is ready to mate"
Read more: How Do Horses Mate? | eHow.com http://www.ehow.com/how-does_4566363_horses-mate.html#ixzz1rI7y0ffJ
Not my fetish but I like the emotions Rainbow goes through. I'll be seeing how this ends up.
Btw: Keep it up :3
416485
I'm curious, can you pm or post the link to that story?
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Main story
My chapters (First things i ever wrote for this fandom, effing terrible btw):
http://www.writing.com/main/interact/item_id/1788720-My-Little-Fetish-Friendship-is-Kinky/map/15212
http://www.writing.com/main/interact/item_id/1788720-My-Little-Fetish-Friendship-is-Kinky/map/152122
http://www.writing.com/main/interact/item_id/1788720-My-Little-Fetish-Friendship-is-Kinky/map/1521222 (This one is where this fic came from)
417526
damn
i just realized that i may not be such a TERRIBLE person
On a more serious note, I'm kinda confused as to why you would research horse related urine facts. It's like the epitome of all things horribly wrong was just mixed and boxed into a single person. Despite all that, homewer, I admire you. Atleast you're coming out with this kind of weird extremely personal semi-furry stuff... oh, and you have great grammar and descriptive skills. GJ.
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Oh to be fair, I've never researched horse sexuality any further than that page (I didn't even read more than that paragraph). I actually saw a post a VERY disturbing post on /mlp/ (4chan) about a detailed description of a guy fingering a real horse, and talking about how when it orgasmed, it urinated. I was actually turned off of ponies and pee for a good half a day after reading that. I googled "horse urinate sex" and found that article, to confirm it was true and just pasted it for you ^^. I'm not concerned with getting any horse-related sex practices accurate D=; I like my ponies cartoony.
417526 I meant the cartoon type of ponies, but point taken.
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Oh okay. That clears up certain things. BTW, I'm sorry for insulting you, I'm kinda quick to snap at weird things.
Looking forward to part 2..
Hey, bit of a long time fan here. I've been reading your stories ever since you posted a link to your blog on /r/clopclop and just now got around to making a profile on this site.
Every time I read something from you, I couldn't stop from noticing parallels between your writing style and mine. It's actually scary; like you're using half my mind when writing these. Logical descriptions, few embellishments, use of parentheses, etc. Seriously, we must have been separated at birth.
Sorry for the OTT. Good story by the way, waiting (im)patiently for part 2.
Im gonna use tthis as a reaction fic later for the lolz
I like your stories, you make urine-fetish stories nice and technicolor, you know?
It still has that comedic hint that makes it all a little more cozy and less domination-ish
Huh. This was actually interesting, and not absolutely horrid like I thought it would be.
I actually like this. And for some reason, I may read your other stories.
...
Who am I kidding, may? I SHALL DO SO POST HASTE!
And an upvote for you!
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have no words
I believe this is appropriate for this... situation. bleep bloop
Despiration + ponies? Yes, please!
What is up with all the people bashing these kinds of stories? If you hate the kink you could always just avoid it. Unless...thou doth protest too much for a reason. 
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I felt mortified for Fluttershy
, but an interesting fic nonetheless. 
When are you planning on posting more? I'm curious how things will turn out with Rainbow Dash! 
I, ah...It, uh...I, ah........It wa-.....I ca-....Just, wa-........I mean......Just.........Uh.....Ah....Oh....Eep....Fus.........................................................Uh......................................
WHAT THE FUCK DID I JUST READ?
Okay... No pants changing here. To sum up:
First I was sad for Fluttershy's terrible accident.
Then I was confused when Pinkie Pie started marking Fluttershy, I know it's a clopfic, but it seemed so unnecessary. She could have sat next to Fluttershy and joined the pee party that way.
Then remembering your previous fanfics I realized how much of a whorse Rainbow Dash is, hahaha. Pinkie Pie, Applejack, AND Fluttershy. Just choose one Rainbow Dash, friends with benefits just makes me feel queasy!
Nothing against you though, your writing hasn't been a disappointment yet, just getting more confusing with each read...
Pinkie stop peeing on Fluttershy!
Seriously that part made go really go
Otherwise it was well written, not a fetish of mine, I read them more as comedy (I'm a horrible person) so I enjoyed it for all the wrong reasons.
Gettin a thumbs up from me.
just what? good, but what?
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How do I keep finding you now dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/sillyfilly_Scootaloo.png
will this be continued sometime?
1022775 Problem? dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Lyra_dealwithit.png
1026971
Nope, just very surprised with which the tendency to find you is
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It was perfect or near-perfectdl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Cloudchaser_dealwithit.png
Beside, with the extra emotes and pics, who wouldn't want to see you more dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Bonbon_OMG_LOVE.png
Probably the hospital wouldn't dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Redheart_smile.png ....
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It is a good question when one thinks about it
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