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Wow.... just... wow.... awesome isn't strong enought... but I can't come up with anything better... so I'll just settle with... AWESOME!!! :pinkiegasp:

426114: How bout.....Amazing, stupendous, HOLY CRAP THaT IS JUST FUCKING AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!
Incredible.....Just some suggestions....

For the fic.....its not my Cup of tea(if you know what I mean) BUT, Im not going to judge cause I don't like these kinds of stories, but it was still well written for a first chapter, so Im giving a thumbs up.:raritywink:

Oh wow... This is just... F*CKING AMAZING!!!! :pinkiegasp:
Seriously man, you continue to prove yourself as one of the greatest clop-fic writers ever!! :rainbowdetermined2:
In the name of celestia, DON'T STOP WRITING!!! :pinkiehappy:

Reads description...not today HighLevelTeen
reads reviews...can't tell if trolling or actually like it
Get's curious...

Once again, we prove that Fluttershy wants to be a tree!
Good fic! A little weird, though...

The peeing part was uncalled for! I mean fucking seriously! WOWZAHZ!!!
Good job on zeh ficz doh! NICE JOBZ!!!
Fucking hilarious!
Also, on a related note, where in the flipping flying nipples of Asgard is the Comedy tag? WHERE IS IT DAMN YOU?!

Stay frosty!
~Hazard~

Before this, I was already able to say I've read a fic about Fluttershy fucking a tree.

Now I can say I've read a fic about Fluttershy fucking a tree after pissing on it for a couple of days.

And one that contains the line "she was certain her pee was delicious" in a semi-serious context.

The hell..is...wrong with you? Sorry, but dislike. ._. Your mind is shitting sickly all over your writing.

Better drink my own piss:pinkiehappy:

Uh, uhhhhh, mmmmmmm, hmmmmm, uhhhhmmmmm

idklol >.>

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I can't believe a story about Fluttershy falling in love with a tree could be weird.

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Comedy? But Fluttershy doesn't think her relationship with her tree friend is a joke! :fluttercry:

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Yeah i should read that Fluttershy x Bloomberg fic to see how it compares.

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Fluttershy doesn't think her love is sick ^_^

I do say, this is a marvelous story, good sir! :moustache:

I'm speechless.

:heart:

Well done, good sir or madam. Your writing style is strange, and yet very intriguing. Also, :yay: for Fluttershy.

Good job! Thanks again for the preview yesterday.

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:ajsleepy: People really don't like a humorous fic about Fluttershy falling in love with a tree and giving it nutrients through her urine, do they? :trollestia:

428405 I really don't care, I just found this image, and I wanted to use it on a really stupid fanfic, and I found yours. Here's a dumber picture:
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Dear Celestia, look at her face! And this is completely serious! I can't stop laughing!
And a sapient species with a mating season? Whatever. Enjoy the magnitude of Sally's mouth.

I can totally see Molestia videotaping this :trollestia:

:rainbowlaugh:

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Reposting my comment from clopfic directory for clarification of this fic:

In Response to "Sapient species wouldn't need mating season's, I don't care what anyone say's. It would never work in any kind of society, and it's just a cheap excuse for hack authors to make stupid and shitty fanfics, like this one. And you are really serious? Like, this isn't a joke?"

Of course it's a joke >.>, and yes I agree they wouldn't need mating seasons, which is why I don't incorporate them in my more serious stories. When writing a piece of fanfiction you have to derive a catalyst from the source. This is why you can make a video of Pinkie Pie squirming with horror as she looks at the horrible shipping pics at the same time having a story about Pinkie Pie falling in love with a mare. You simply build upon a derived characteristic. For fun I took the idea that ponies were horses and took two key elements: mating seasons and the display of urination a mare uses to tell a stallion she is ready for mating. One can reasonably suspend their disbelief of sapient creatures having a mating season to make the story work. I just wanted to make a silly fic about Fluttershy peeing, as per my norm. It just so happened I chose what you see here as the plot elements. Try not to take me too seriously, I'm not trying to make money, nor am I an english major. I simply think writing is an important skill, and writing pony porn for pleasure helps me build upon my writing skills. This fic wasn't to demonstrate my gripping plot and loyalty to source material skills, it was more of the desire to create a character having a mental break down as well as going into greater detail than I normally do with urination. I'm sorry if you think the mating season is a cheap excuse for a shitty fanfic, everyone is entitled to their own opinion, and I just think while unrealistic, it still can provide the backbone for a decent fic if the writer is skilled enough (not saying I am, but I did find "beating the heat" to be humorous from what I read).

Edit: seriously fuck it, I just added a comedy tag; It was supposed to be part of the joke not having one, but people still think I'm being serious about this being a viable clopfic or portraying deep psycholgocal romance to an inanimate object. This was simply written on a whim, with a random idea that popped into my head; this is now my fourth incomplete fic if you don't beleive me.

FUCKING trees.

Awesome story so far. :raritywink:

427133 It's worth looking up. It ends on a different type of comedy, but there are also some similarities between that and this one.

Fluttershy sexing and peeing it up with a tree? gigglesnort. Wonder what them babies would look like. :unsuresweetie:

It has a comedy tag now? *Checks* Why yes, it does.

To be honest, I loved this fic. Sure, pee might not be everyone's cup of tea, not mine either that's for certain, but I wouldn't let that bring me down. I put it out of my mind and read on anyhow, and was rewarded for it. Sure, it is a strange fic, but on the other hoof it is about a butter-yellow coloured pegasus with butterflies on her flanks. And besides which, even though its strangeness it is intimate. Thumbs Up!

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> Yeah i should read that Fluttershy x Bloomberg fic to see how it compares.

http://www.fimfiction.net/story/3083/I%27d-Like-to-be-a-Tree

Here you go! Haven't read yours yet, but I will when I find the time. As for mine, I tried to make it realistic. If that is even possible.

Tastes her own piss and becomes intimate with a tree, a member of the wilderness.

Fluttershy is turning into her own version of Bear Grylls.

That was beautiful! And I mean it! Very well written! :twilightsmile:

This was an amazing fic, describing the relationship of Fluttershy and her sapling.
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KINKY!! an very well written good job :)

Still fucking amazing :) but when r u going to add more chapters to this an the other unfinished stories??

Once again, she had to simply her raging arousal.

I think you accidentally forgot a word or two. Great fic, BTW.

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