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Interesting. I liked it!

Good read, I liked how unprepaired they ended up being.

Not bad, I wish you luck with your next story.

This is funny.

lol! that ending!:pinkiehappy:

I know the story says complete, but somehow the whole thing makes me feel that something more could be done with the characters. it has much more effort than I usually find in changeling-ships. :pinkiehappy:

So... Make love, not war? :rainbowlaugh: This was really fun, clever, and very well-written. Excellent short story.

BTW, second to last line is missing a quotation mark:
"Oh, come on! He stomped a hoof in frustration. should be
"Oh, come on!" He stomped a hoof in frustration.

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Good catch. I fixed it. Glad you enjoyed it!

Dang, I thought it was going to be necromorphs... and then I wondered what it was doing in romance.

I really liked this story. The soldier mentality, as well as the camaraderie, really make it.
And that sex scene; bingo. Perfect combo of romance and... ahem.

Keep it up!
--Warlord

LOL! XD Those last few lines are hilarious!

Great story! =D

lol :rainbowlaugh: now that was a funny as story

"Which one" <---that made me fall to the floor, howling in laughter.

I liked very much. And now i am curious if you have a story shipping Squall and the main character.

"Forget spitting. I heard they swallow!"

To me, that was the funniest line in this story.:rainbowlaugh:
I didn't find the ending funny at all, like most did.:rainbowhuh:
Have a like.:twilightsmile:

Hahah, nice. Liked it.

I wonder if they eventually did manage to establish some real contact with the changelings.

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