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Sweet story, looking forward to the next chapter!
A sequel to The Only Thing Better Than Flying, Heck Yeah!!
its finally here
I hadn't read the original, but this one intrigues me. Aside from the indentation, this story seems really sweet. I enjoy the slow, everyday sort of pacing going on here, and the relationship between AJ and RD feels believable. I'm not a real fan of Appledash, but Rarishy's high on my list, so I'm gonna toss this one a favorite and wait for that particular pot to boil over. There were a few spelling and sentence structure errors, but not enough to detract from the overall story.
In short: Good work, not sure why it hasn't gotten more love yet.
Love this story! I'm so excited to see where this goes!!
love the story so far
Wooooah! All those dislikes! I didn't know the story was that bad.
Oh, well. I'm gonna go ahead and start the next chapter now.
A great story. Very solid and with good development that doesn't get boring.
And now I shall be a bad person
"Ah stood on the bucket to get somethin' down from one of the lower lofts." Big Mac asked.
See the problem?
No Matter! Tis good and deserves nothing like than a thumbs up and a
3639691 Its the unholy demons that automatically hate appledash. Every story always gets 10-20 dislikes ou of auto haters, its really pathetic that people do it.
3639962 Got it! Thanks for letting me know the mistake.
ex·or·bi·tant
igˈzôrbitənt
adjective
1.
(of a price or amount charged) unreasonably high.
"the exorbitant price of tickets"
Just a note; the link to the prequel didn't work in the description.
Anywho, will go check that out now that I know this is actually a sequel.
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It would have been really funny if "gesticulation" was used instead
3641034 Actually,
ex·or·bi·tant [ig-zawr-bi-tuhnt]
adjective
exceeding the bounds of custom, propriety, or reason, especially in amount or extent; highly excessive: to charge an exorbitant price; exorbitant luxury.
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Origin:
1425–75; late Middle English < Late Latin exorbitant- (stem of exorbitāns, present participle of exorbitāre to go out of the track), equivalent to ex- ex-1 + orbit ( a ) wheel track (see orbit) + -ant- -ant
The word can be used in many different ways.
3642325 Yeah, I actually haven't the slightest clue as to how to find the story ID...
I always love a good Appledash story, so thank you for writing a good Appledash story so I can love it.
I'll be patiently waiting for more.
You have earned a thumbs up, favorite, and a
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—Go to the first story
—In the web address there should be a number (eg. for this story at the moment, the web address is http://www.fimfiction.net/story/151218/only-for-her); copy the number of the first story
—Come back to this story
—Click "Edit Story"
—Paste number in field "Prequel Story ID"
—Save changes
That's all there is to it!
EDIT: Here, the number you need from "The Only Thing Better Than Flying" is 70338.
3645997 Alright! Thank you so much!
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Happy to be of assistance!
"Well..." Applejack said. "Neither of us have really talked to each other about it..." Applejack said. "Ah mean, who hasn't thought about what their children would be like?"
I really like your story so far, I'm even reading your prequel The Only Thing Better Than Flying. What I've notice in your dialog in this story is your heavy use of the word said. There are many cases where it is understood who is talking with out the 'pony name said'. I not going to go into it because I see that you can do dialog. The above speech is flat could use some colour (mannerisms). Looking forward to your chapter 2.
I can't wait to read what you have in store for Fluttershy and Rarity. I hope Fluttershy is the aggressor
in this shipping to off set her timidness. Keep up the good work. 
I have said it before, so I'll say it again. Appledash is best shipping. I can prove this with tea-leaf readings. I like this story a lot, even if Rarity acts like Mistress Obvious (sister to Captain Obvious) and points out that two mares cannot produce children.
owwweeee...
Sentence: One bonk of the Clue-Hammer to her horned head.
BONK
This gets a fave, upvote and a watch from me.
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Ah yes, I can see it already.
"My dear, I-I just meant this as some time together as friends. I didn't know- I mean, I had no idea you felt-"
"LOVE ME!!!!!!!!!"
3686948 Seeing how
rejected 
in The Only Thing Better Than Flying. She'll be damned if she lets 
get away. I would like to see 
talk some slick lines and have unexpected strength, but have that as a secret between 
and the reader.
3687422 Well, technically
was never really truly wanting to be with 
. She just wanted to be a good friend and comfort 
in that bad time. So 
was never really rejected by 
.
... would any of you object to me smacking that ungrateful little brat Sapphire upside her stuck-up head, nopony talks to Rarity like that and gets away with it
So from what i hawe read, Applejack and Rainbow is going to, i assume adopt a foal.
And Rarity is going from hawing the hots for Fancypants to eventually hawing the hots for Flutters.
Man this is going to be interesting.
i love it and i hope Rainbow and Applejack truly have a baby of both of theirs because that would be totally cute if they did
Anywho, like I said, I really love this story, and I can't wait for more!
What can I say. Your story was very good and I can see you have improved your dialog. Growing by leaps and bounds. At one point I thought your story was going to have a gender changing spell, glad you didn't.
Now I have to wait for Chapter 4.
Well I hoping for nothing... so surprise me.
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Queens are generally evil, but kings aren't. First example in Disney I can think of: King Triton. He is a stern father figure, but not evil.
3817003 or simba and mufasa XD
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Hmm, good point. Although I think for a slim majority of the (first) movie, Scar was king.
Further thinking on it, Sarabi and Nala were not evil queens, although I'm not sure if they were ever explicitly stated to be queens or if it was just implied.
3827774 yeah, but I think Disney has confused a lot of people, or so says the hub network. For one, I wasn't ever confused about it, I knew king and queens were just the leaders and their children was princesses and princes until crowned. So I was just like wtf when they said that.
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Knowledge is different from word association. The association is there, at least for many people, even though they know after thinking for even half a second that being a queen is far from the same as being evil.
It is a learned bias, and is similar to some of the reasons why racism and sexism are so hard to get rid of, even in people who know better.
3827798 good point
YAY!!! New update, I love this story
The More of this that comes out, the better, I have a feeling that Applejack and Rainbow will both be like mentors to Fluttershy and Rarity, so wtf are Pinkie and Twilight going to do?
Wait, nvm Im not even going to get into that… :twilight oops: any who, MORE PLEASE!!!
Was it just supposed to trail off at the end there? Or am I missing something?
3999210 feels like some parts were eaten, yeah...
It seemed as though nothing was accomplished!
I like this chapter but we got nowhere in the story or relationship just more confusing questions. like Does Rarity like Fluttershy? I mean probably but still how will she react when she finds out Fluttershy does like her? Why are there so many questions? Why did I list so few? Who knows?
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AH! Jesus, what the hell?! That was NOT the end of the chapter! I had the entire rest of the damn thing typed and saved before I published it, but now it's gone?! WHAT IS THAT?
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Alrighty! The chapter is now truly finished and published! Give it a read and let me know what you think! I still have no idea what the hell happened.
4003791 oh dear....
Comment revision: Few spelling mishaps here and there, but that's alright. Story was OK overall will have to waiting to see how the story develops between
& 
and if 
& 
will have 
.
4005113 Mishaps? Would you kindly enlighten me?
4007596 Sorry I made my comment around 5 am so I didn't post them right away, notice the story seem to end early... computer glitch most likely. Please keep in mind that there maybe none. I'll PM you once I read it again.
Omg..... I love this story.......