Sweet story, looking forward to the next chapter!

A sequel to The Only Thing Better Than Flying, Heck Yeah!!

its finally here

I hadn't read the original, but this one intrigues me. Aside from the indentation, this story seems really sweet. I enjoy the slow, everyday sort of pacing going on here, and the relationship between AJ and RD feels believable. I'm not a real fan of Appledash, but Rarishy's high on my list, so I'm gonna toss this one a favorite and wait for that particular pot to boil over. There were a few spelling and sentence structure errors, but not enough to detract from the overall story.

In short: Good work, not sure why it hasn't gotten more love yet.

Love this story! I'm so excited to see where this goes!!

love the story so far

Wooooah! All those dislikes! I didn't know the story was that bad.

Oh, well. I'm gonna go ahead and start the next chapter now.

A great story. Very solid and with good development that doesn't get boring.

And now I shall be a bad person

"Ah stood on the bucket to get somethin' down from one of the lower lofts." Big Mac asked.

See the problem?

No Matter! Tis good and deserves nothing like than a thumbs up and a

3639691 Its the unholy demons that automatically hate appledash. Every story always gets 10-20 dislikes ou of auto haters, its really pathetic that people do it.

3639962 Got it! Thanks for letting me know the mistake.

Granny Smith made an exorbitant gesture

ex·or·bi·tant
igˈzôrbitənt
adjective
1.
(of a price or amount charged) unreasonably high.
"the exorbitant price of tickets"

Just a note; the link to the prequel didn't work in the description.

Anywho, will go check that out now that I know this is actually a sequel.

3641034
It would have been really funny if "gesticulation" was used instead

3641034 Actually,

ex·or·bi·tant [ig-zawr-bi-tuhnt]

adjective
exceeding the bounds of custom, propriety, or reason, especially in amount or extent; highly excessive: to charge an exorbitant price; exorbitant luxury.

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Origin:
1425–75; late Middle English < Late Latin exorbitant- (stem of exorbitāns, present participle of exorbitāre to go out of the track), equivalent to ex- ex-1 + orbit ( a ) wheel track (see orbit) + -ant- -ant

The word can be used in many different ways.

3642325 Yeah, I actually haven't the slightest clue as to how to find the story ID...

I always love a good Appledash story, so thank you for writing a good Appledash story so I can love it.

I'll be patiently waiting for more.

You have earned a thumbs up, favorite, and a

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—Go to the first story
—In the web address there should be a number (eg. for this story at the moment, the web address is http://www.fimfiction.net/story/151218/only-for-her); copy the number of the first story
—Come back to this story
—Click "Edit Story"
—Paste number in field "Prequel Story ID"
—Save changes

That's all there is to it!

EDIT: Here, the number you need from "The Only Thing Better Than Flying" is 70338.

3645997 Alright! Thank you so much!

3646465
Happy to be of assistance!

"Well..." Applejack said. "Neither of us have really talked to each other about it..." Applejack said. "Ah mean, who hasn't thought about what their children would be like?"

I really like your story so far, I'm even reading your prequel The Only Thing Better Than Flying. What I've notice in your dialog in this story is your heavy use of the word said. There are many cases where it is understood who is talking with out the 'pony name said'. I not going to go into it because I see that you can do dialog. The above speech is flat could use some colour (mannerisms). Looking forward to your chapter 2.

I have said it before, so I'll say it again. Appledash is best shipping. I can prove this with tea-leaf readings. I like this story a lot, even if Rarity acts like Mistress Obvious (sister to Captain Obvious) and points out that two mares cannot produce children.
Sentence: One bonk of the Clue-Hammer to her horned head.
BONK
owwweeee...
This gets a fave, upvote and a watch from me.

Omg... He made the sequel yes thank you I love your stories thank you

sorry i over reacted but come on guys we all know what ya'll did too

sorry i over reacted but come on we all know thats what we did when we saw this