You write confrontation well. Also, that moment of tranquillity with Flutters dancing and cooking with Angel was really nice. Painted a lovely picture. I could see Molly Ringwald or somebody doing that to blow off steam in some 80’s flick.
Boy, Rares sure stepped in it, didn’t she? Up until FP (I can’t take that stallion’s name seriously, lol) insulted Sweetie, I couldn’t even fault him for his actions. Rarity really screwed with ponies’ emotions.
How DARE she just kiss Fluttershy after their earlier conversation? That poor filly has a confidence problem, and you go and disrespect her wishes like that? Bucking bitch! Ponies really need to stop surprise kissing other ponies in general. Use your damned words until you know you have permission.
Oof, only 16 chapters, huh? I get the feeling we ain’t gonna get to witness the birth. Although you do jump ahead by months at a time, so who knows? Usually these incomplete stories end at extremely dissatisfying points, so I’m bracing myself and tempering my expectations. It’s a shame - this is some of the finest AppleDash on FimFiction.
That shit with Spitfire… she wouldn’t… right?! I’m not prepared to hate Rainbow.
Well,... that escalated quickly
"What did you just say" is ALWAYS code for "start lying now, for all that you're worth."
A roller coaster of emotion and I love it.
You write confrontation well. Also, that moment of tranquillity with Flutters dancing and cooking with Angel was really nice. Painted a lovely picture. I could see Molly Ringwald or somebody doing that to blow off steam in some 80’s flick.
Boy, Rares sure stepped in it, didn’t she? Up until FP (I can’t take that stallion’s name seriously, lol) insulted Sweetie, I couldn’t even fault him for his actions. Rarity really screwed with ponies’ emotions.
How DARE she just kiss Fluttershy after their earlier conversation? That poor filly has a confidence problem, and you go and disrespect her wishes like that? Bucking bitch! Ponies really need to stop surprise kissing other ponies in general. Use your damned words until you know you have permission.
Oof, only 16 chapters, huh? I get the feeling we ain’t gonna get to witness the birth. Although you do jump ahead by months at a time, so who knows? Usually these incomplete stories end at extremely dissatisfying points, so I’m bracing myself and tempering my expectations. It’s a shame - this is some of the finest AppleDash on FimFiction.
That shit with Spitfire… she wouldn’t… right?! I’m not prepared to hate Rainbow.