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Before I even read it, I notice that you have committed one of the greatest heresies on this website. You shipped Rainbow Dash with an OC after having said OC befriending the Main Six.
Post Reading: Everything was going pretty damn good, until the OC showed up. I mean, we almost never get this kind of preexisting quality on a first time work. Usually it's a wall of text with no plot and no punctuation. At least you have the basics down.
Usually I don't like stories with gore in them. However this one seems interesting. I will be tracking this. Lets see where this goes.
1202645 Wait...so you don't like that my OC is shipped with Rainbow Dash? Well, sorry to disappoint you, but this is the way the story is going to go.
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I haven't read this story nor do I intend to so I'm a little biased here but most OCxMane 6 stories are just the author living out a dream. With an OC you don't have a set personality so you could easily have him act as if he was you and write the story as he (you) gets in love with RD.
While your story may or may not be like that, that's my biggest gripe with OC stories. It's also hard to craft a good OC. Nobody's perfect but your OC is everything Rainbow looks for in a stallion. I hope you at least have them getting in love instead of:
Sees pony
instantly smitten with him/her (what most writers do)
This was constructive criticism
1203171 Well, I'm going to be honest, my OC has a personality similar to mine. But he's not shot-for-shot like me by any means. And things don't get real between him and Dash until chapter 5. I have the whole story planned out chapter by chapter and each one will be 2k-7k words. They're gonna get to know each other first, I assure you. I'm sorry that I can't keep you as a reader.
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Don't feel sorry. You never had me as a reader to beging with so you did nothing wrong to make me not read this story. Just not overly fond of OC's.
vampire i swear he is a vampire
1247423 I guess you'll just have to find out.
Gief next chapter pl0x
1249728 Uuuuuhhhhh......what?
1249810 heh, sorry about that.
Read that at 1 am in the morning, so i was kinda tired.
And weird shit happens when im tired
What i meant was I want another chapter ASAP
1252506 Oh okay. And you shall have it.
1252664 Sweet!
Ooo, good story so far! Discord is pretty awesome I agree.
You have my favorite
I'm a sucker for RD x OC romances.
I can't help but feel that Brick Smasher is actually normal like Steel and finds it much more difficult to actually kill him to "cure" himself (being morally wrong and all).
1365787 Thank you very much! I always appreciate a new reader.
1366227 You'll just have to find out, my friend.
Discord is best 'pony'
Who's awesome?
You're awesome.
on one side, i feel like ripping out your eyes and ears for all that assholeism that one vampire did to steel
on the other side, i want to rip out all your guys for not making steel kill that vampire RIGHT FUCKING NOW
either way i want to rip something off you
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Aww, thanks, man!
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Alright, I'm just curious, but did I have four down votes before I uploaded this chapter?
Dunno why people don't like OC shipping stories. I actually prefer them.
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Damn skippy
1607500
Skippy? Elaborate on your statement please.
1607500 It means he agrees with you.
Frick yeah.
*clap clap clap*
Wierd, i had a dream that i was like abraham licoln (vamp hunter) and i hunted andkilled steel. What's even wierder is i felt everything. Anyways good story i liked it from the very begining.
1670476>>1662356 Glad you guys liked it!
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Mmmkay. Strange dream. All the same, glad you enjoyed the story.
Stay tuned for the epilogue, guys! Figured I'd wrap the story up.
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Told you it was wierd. Whats next? Bill Clinton warewolf killer
Very nice ending my good stallion. I see you brought Discord back into the mix. It's good to hear my father has been let out of his stone prison. Anyway, off to go pester Diamond Tiara and Filthy Rich with fake bits made of chocolate. Arrivaderci!!!
I sense a sequel with Discord and Luna, or with SA and RD getting married.
1683400 Hmmm...I honestly hadn't planned a sequel...but, the CelestiaxDiscord idea has me interested. Perhaps I'll do it after I finish my Appledash story that I'm planning.
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AppleDash?
APPLEDASH?!
You make a male OC x RD story, and then write an AppleDash fic?
OK, you know how cliche it is to make the rainbow colored tomboy a lesbian, right?
Go on. Guess. Yeah, sorry for the spoiler, but straight RD is now canon. 
Besides that, later in season 3, you'll never guess who's gonna get romantic with a stallion.
I hate all lesbian Mane Six (and Ditzy Doo) ships with a passion. (I don't care about all of the other mare's sexual orientation; and I fully support equal marriage rights btw). I'm sorry, but that won't get my favorite. Please forgive me.
Besides all of this, we all know Pinkie x Discord makes more sense than Celestia x Discord
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*Whistles* Wow, that was pretty intense. Well, I hate to disappoint you, man, but Appledash is my favorite shipping. And I've always considered Rainbow Dash to be bisexual, not a straight up butch lesbian, because she does do some pretty girly things in the show sometimes. And where exactly did you find this spoiler? I'd like to read it if you could provide me with a link. I'm going to write the story, though, because Appledash, again, is my favorite ship. If the story won't get your favorite, that's fine. I'm sorry that my most loyal reader so far is so disgruntled, though. 
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I truly do apologize for my disgruntlement (thats a word, right?)
I can't give you a link. But I have heard multiple times RD will be paired with a stallion that has yet to show up in the background. I have heard this from a few sources, mainly some pony talk at church and school.
Again I apologize. Expect me to drop fave when you write the Discord x Celestia fic (even if Pinkie is much better for him)
Laters.
1690817 No, it's fine, really. Your opinion is your opinion. But even so, Again, I don't consider Rainbow Dash to be a complete lesbian. I see her as being bisexual liking both stallions and mares, and not giving a crap what anypony else thinks!
That being said, I'm not asking for a favorite from you when I do start posting the Appledash fic. Thank you for your readership on Moonlit Eternity! 
1690940
I should be thanking you.
Everywhere I see are stories that stereotype RD as a lesbian. And then I find this. This is like the 5th or 6th story I've found where the mare was straight. THERE IS STILL HOPE!
This is the second best RD x OC story I've read (read Just Dropping In, you won't regret it.)
I'll drop a like on the AppleDash fic, but I won't read it.
I give no lesbian mane six (or Ditzy Doo) shipping stories a chance. Ever. But I will still drop a like out of respect.
And remember that I support equal marriage rights, so don't say I'm homophobic or anything.
1690986 Thanks, I appreciate the like.
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Welcome
MMMOOOOAAAAARRRRRRR!!!!!!!
D'awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww...... (some time later).....wwwwwwwwwwwww...w...! *thud*
Dissssscooooord!!
It's time to hunt the motherbuckers that disliked this story!!!
2446500 Remember love and toleration?
1207016 So why bother saying anything at all? Kind of being a dick, mate.
2574529
You're digging up a comment of 36 weeks ago
I wasn't being insulting in any way. I just warned him of things that other authors tend to do that makes most stories bad.
2574529 2574553 It's true, man. He was very civil in his criticism of the story. It's fine, really. No worries, either of you guys!
2445580Umm...you alright?
*Pokesyou* Hello?