• Published 2nd Sep 2012
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Moonlit Eternity - djingledjango



Rainbow falls in love with the new blacksmith in Ponyville. But he has a dark secret...

Comments ( 28 )

Very nice ending my good stallion. I see you brought Discord back into the mix. It's good to hear my father has been let out of his stone prison. Anyway, off to go pester Diamond Tiara and Filthy Rich with fake bits made of chocolate. Arrivaderci!!!

I sense a sequel with Discord and Luna, or with SA and RD getting married. :yay:

1683400 Hmmm...I honestly hadn't planned a sequel...but, the CelestiaxDiscord idea has me interested. Perhaps I'll do it after I finish my Appledash story that I'm planning. :ajsmug:

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AppleDash?:applecry:
APPLEDASH?! :flutterrage:
You make a male OC x RD story, and then write an AppleDash fic?

OK, you know how cliche it is to make the rainbow colored tomboy a lesbian, right? :unsuresweetie:
Besides that, later in season 3, you'll never guess who's gonna get romantic with a stallion. :ajbemused: Go on. Guess. Yeah, sorry for the spoiler, but straight RD is now canon. :yay:
I hate all lesbian Mane Six (and Ditzy Doo) ships with a passion. (I don't care about all of the other mare's sexual orientation; and I fully support equal marriage rights btw). I'm sorry, but that won't get my favorite. Please forgive me. :fluttershysad:

Besides all of this, we all know Pinkie x Discord makes more sense than Celestia x Discord

1685200 :derpyderp2: *Whistles* Wow, that was pretty intense. Well, I hate to disappoint you, man, but Appledash is my favorite shipping. And I've always considered Rainbow Dash to be bisexual, not a straight up butch lesbian, because she does do some pretty girly things in the show sometimes. And where exactly did you find this spoiler? I'd like to read it if you could provide me with a link. I'm going to write the story, though, because Appledash, again, is my favorite ship. If the story won't get your favorite, that's fine. I'm sorry that my most loyal reader so far is so disgruntled, though. :applejackunsure:

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I truly do apologize for my disgruntlement (thats a word, right?)
I can't give you a link. But I have heard multiple times RD will be paired with a stallion that has yet to show up in the background. I have heard this from a few sources, mainly some pony talk at church and school.
Again I apologize. Expect me to drop fave when you write the Discord x Celestia fic (even if Pinkie is much better for him)
Laters.
:twilightsmile:

1690817 No, it's fine, really. Your opinion is your opinion. But even so, Again, I don't consider Rainbow Dash to be a complete lesbian. I see her as being bisexual liking both stallions and mares, and not giving a crap what anypony else thinks! :rainbowdetermined2: That being said, I'm not asking for a favorite from you when I do start posting the Appledash fic. Thank you for your readership on Moonlit Eternity! :pinkiehappy:

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I should be thanking you.
Everywhere I see are stories that stereotype RD as a lesbian. And then I find this. This is like the 5th or 6th story I've found where the mare was straight. THERE IS STILL HOPE!
This is the second best RD x OC story I've read (read Just Dropping In, you won't regret it.)
I'll drop a like on the AppleDash fic, but I won't read it.
I give no lesbian mane six (or Ditzy Doo) shipping stories a chance. Ever. But I will still drop a like out of respect. :scootangel:
And remember that I support equal marriage rights, so don't say I'm homophobic or anything.

1690986 Thanks, I appreciate the like.

MMMOOOOAAAAARRRRRRR!!!!!!!

2446500 Remember love and toleration?

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You're digging up a comment of 36 weeks ago:facehoof:

I wasn't being insulting in any way. I just warned him of things that other authors tend to do that makes most stories bad.

2574529 2574553 It's true, man. He was very civil in his criticism of the story. It's fine, really. No worries, either of you guys! :pinkiehappy:

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Eeeeeeeeeeeeeyup! :eeyup:

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First of all, it's ma'am. :twilightsmile:

Secondly, sneak attack. Then burn them. Burn them! BURN THEM ALL!! :pinkiecrazy:

2647952Sorry, Ma'am. And of course. I shall lead the troops right away.

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Besides, what other stallion could go with RD? Soarin'? Naw. Big Mac? Maybe. Steel Anvil?

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(\ As do I Human :pinkiesmile:

2649347 Hahaha. I really appreciate that, man. :pinkiesmile:

2647745 Oh, and yes. Freaking love that song.

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:applejackconfused: Oh, dang. You weren't kidding. Nearly all of those were OC romances! :rainbowlaugh:

2807446 Well now, looks like someone's had a bad day. :ajsmug:

Well, this epilogue demands a sequel. Have him propose, they get married, she finds out she is pregnant from the time they had sex on the ship that you didn't show us, kid is born, vampire maybe (no)? Either way that you write it, I would actually like to see a sequel come out of this.
Oh, and how could I forget to say what I thought of the story? I enjoyed it quite a bit. I'm not against OC stories that have a romance with one of the Mane 6, but, like this one, it has to have a good plot and be well thought out. I'll be looking forward to reading more by you in the future. Keep up the great writing!

3021816 oh trust me when i say that I hate twilight. Dracula was my main inspiration for this story.

Love this story, I agree with everyone else, this epilogue demands a sequel :derpytongue2:

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