Before I even read it, I notice that you have committed one of the greatest heresies on this website. You shipped Rainbow Dash with an OC after having said OC befriending the Main Six.
Post Reading: Everything was going pretty damn good, until the OC showed up. I mean, we almost never get this kind of preexisting quality on a first time work. Usually it's a wall of text with no plot and no punctuation. At least you have the basics down.
1203010 I haven't read this story nor do I intend to so I'm a little biased here but most OCxMane 6 stories are just the author living out a dream. With an OC you don't have a set personality so you could easily have him act as if he was you and write the story as he (you) gets in love with RD.
While your story may or may not be like that, that's my biggest gripe with OC stories. It's also hard to craft a good OC. Nobody's perfect but your OC is everything Rainbow looks for in a stallion. I hope you at least have them getting in love instead of: Sees pony instantly smitten with him/her (what most writers do)
1203171 Well, I'm going to be honest, my OC has a personality similar to mine. But he's not shot-for-shot like me by any means. And things don't get real between him and Dash until chapter 5. I have the whole story planned out chapter by chapter and each one will be 2k-7k words. They're gonna get to know each other first, I assure you. I'm sorry that I can't keep you as a reader.
1204291 Don't feel sorry. You never had me as a reader to beging with so you did nothing wrong to make me not read this story. Just not overly fond of OC's.
Before I even read it, I notice that you have committed one of the greatest heresies on this website. You shipped Rainbow Dash with an OC after having said OC befriending the Main Six.
Post Reading: Everything was going pretty damn good, until the OC showed up. I mean, we almost never get this kind of preexisting quality on a first time work. Usually it's a wall of text with no plot and no punctuation. At least you have the basics down.
Usually I don't like stories with gore in them. However this one seems interesting. I will be tracking this. Lets see where this goes.
1202645 Wait...so you don't like that my OC is shipped with Rainbow Dash? Well, sorry to disappoint you, but this is the way the story is going to go.
1203010
I haven't read this story nor do I intend to so I'm a little biased here but most OCxMane 6 stories are just the author living out a dream. With an OC you don't have a set personality so you could easily have him act as if he was you and write the story as he (you) gets in love with RD.
While your story may or may not be like that, that's my biggest gripe with OC stories. It's also hard to craft a good OC. Nobody's perfect but your OC is everything Rainbow looks for in a stallion. I hope you at least have them getting in love instead of:
Sees pony
instantly smitten with him/her (what most writers do)
This was constructive criticism
1203171 Well, I'm going to be honest, my OC has a personality similar to mine. But he's not shot-for-shot like me by any means. And things don't get real between him and Dash until chapter 5. I have the whole story planned out chapter by chapter and each one will be 2k-7k words. They're gonna get to know each other first, I assure you. I'm sorry that I can't keep you as a reader.
1204291
Don't feel sorry. You never had me as a reader to beging with so you did nothing wrong to make me not read this story. Just not overly fond of OC's.
You have my favorite
I'm a sucker for RD x OC romances.
1207016 So why bother saying anything at all? Kind of being a dick, mate.
Don't go to the Library She'll Rape you
1365787 I"m a sucker for any OC Romances just check my favs
I like how this is coming along so far. Excellent introduction to Steel.
I yawned as I read that. WTF!?
Interesting, likable.