The Night Before Hearth's Warming

by defender2222

Twas the Night before Hearth's Warming

Twas the night 'fore Hearth's Warming
And down at the Apple's farm
Everything was peaceful
No need for alarm

Applebloom was nestled
asleep in her bed
while visions of cutie marks
danced through her head

Big Mac wore his harness
and AJ her cap
and both were quite ready
for a long winter's nap

When out on the lawn
there arose such a clatter
They raised to the window
to see what was the matter

While inside it was toasty
Outside the wind did blow
The temperature kept dropping
with trees caked in snow

Applejack gazed out
What she saw, fillies and colts
was a great red sleigh
pulled by the Wonderbolts!

They snorted and bucked
Those pegasi so quick
performing maneuvers
and all manner of tricks

Applejack was breathless
'Could this be a dream?'
That's when she saw her
The mare guiding the team!

She was energetic and happy
and had a certain buzz
But Applejack was confused
and didn't know who it was

More rapid than capricorns
those Wonderbolts came
And the mare giggled out loud
and called them by name

"On Spitfire and Soarin'
On Fleetfoot and Sky Beam
On Blitzwing and Skywarp
Thundercracker and Starscream!"

Mac heard new noises
clear up on the roof
and realized it was the stomping
of many a hoof!

Down the chimney
the mare came with a groan
and brushing her mane said
"Hey AJ, nice home!"

She was wearing long coat
with flour all over
and AJ smelled the scents
of peppermint and clover

She had a pink mane
as poofy as could be
and her smile never broke
for she was quite happy

"Pinkie!" AJ shouted
startled by her friend
"What are you doing?
Have you gone off the bend?"

"Do not be silly!"
The mare said without pause
"I am not Pinkamena
I'm the one and only Pinkie Claus!"

And with that the pink mare
reached deep in her sack
and said "Let's see what I got
Your big brother Mac!"

"You work awfully hard
bringing in your yield.
And your back must ache
after a day in the field.

"Those aches are common
and have become the norm
To soothe you I got a blanket
that is toasty and warm!"

A deep blue blanket
was pulled from that sack
And Pinkie draped it
across his great back

Macintosh gave her a smile
and a kiss on the cheek
for this present was perfect
and had just made his week

"Next is little Applebloom,
always off on a lark.
So to her a book on ponies
who took long getting a cutie mark!

"I know finding her talent
has made her greatly moan
But seeing these famous ponies
wiill make her feel less alone!"

The next present was metal
and it was a dandy
Applejack admired it:
a new walker for Granny

"Now don't worry Applejack!
I haven't forgotten you
For here are some fluffy coats
and some new bowls too!

"The coat keeps you toasty
even as the winds make you quake
and the bowls are for the kitchen
to make yummy apple cake!"

Her task now completed
Pinkie Claus made to go
But Applejack stopped her
for she needed to know:

"Why did you do this?
Why do this for us?
You went above and beyond
so why all the fuss?"

Pinkie just smiled
"It's simple, you see
You aren't just my friend
You're also family.

"I can not do magic
But for once, on this night
I can do something amazing
To make your season quite bright!"

And with that she ambled off
heading towards the old door
But AJ leapt in front of her
to tell Pinkie more.

"You're also my family, sugar
And if you're headed the girls' way
I'd like to join with you
if there's room in that sleigh."

And believe or not
this is what they say
Pinkie's brillant smile
grew three sizes that day!

The two leapt in the sleigh
pulled by eight Wonderbolts
and they raced up skywards
without any jolts

They would visit each house
and see each precious friend
who in turn would join them
and be together at the end

For this the merry season
and best believe the boast
Tis better to be with those
that love you the most

Forget all your presents
trees, tinsel and the rest
For love and friendship
are truly the best

Racing away, Pinkie called out:
"Our next stop: Twilight!"
"Happy Hearth's warming" AJ echoed
"And to all a good night!"

"Luna, are you ok?" Princess Celestia asked, ambling over to her little sister. She had heard some strange sniffling sounds and had grown afraid that Luna was feeling down again. However, when the solar princess found her sister, Luna was not at all in a blue mood. The night ruler was, in fact, gazing down from her balcony, a small smile on her face as she watched her little ponies.

"We are very well, sister, very well," Luna said, quickly wiping away a tear and hiding the poem she had been working on based on the events she had just witnessed.

"Well, I am glad to hear that," Celestis said with a yawn, rolling her wings a bit to work out the kinks. There was a reason she didn't stay up past sunset most nights. "I will see you in the morning."

"Goodnight, sister," Luna said, turning her attention to the moon and making it just a bit brighter.

After all, Pinkie Claus would need plenty of light to complete her run.

To all of you reading, happy Hearth's Warming Day from the ponies of Equestria. Thank you for your love, respect, and attention.

Good night.

Comments

[defender2222]

This is something that suddenly came to me a few hours ago. i wanted to write a sweet little holiday one-shot that wasn't anything like my normal style. I hope you all enjoy it.

[Dash The Stampede]

Cute, heartwarming and ITS A POEM! My favorite medium for writing.

One solitary error:

"I am not Pinkamenia

PINKAMANIA!
or maybe just Pinkamena. That works too.

My hearth is warmed by your verse, good sir.

[Nia Moone 0]

[djthomp]

Cute and heartwarming. That was just what I needed after a particularly upsetting chapter of something else that I read an hour or so ago.

[Knight of Lycaeus]

Quite cute and nice, though I just laughed when I realized the Wonderbolts were the reindeers especially once they were being called out, also Starscream the Wonderbolt? For a moment the name was making think of Transformers and then roboponies and then robots hiding as ponies.

[defender2222]

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That is literally the only joke in the entire story and the only reason it is there is because 1) it's pinkie and 2) They never really named any of the Wonderbolts save a few and I needed 8 names.

[Knight of Lycaeus]

3572105
It works though now I'm starting to imagine roboponies coloured like Starscream.

[defender2222]

3572112

I did establish in TMSOoS that in one world there are Applebots and Tiaracons

[AutoKnight01]

HNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNG! I LOVE IT! AND THE TRANSFORMER WONDERBOLTS! AWESOME!

[Dash The Stampede]

This actually just inspired me to write a little poetic verse myself! I've published it just now. Thanks for reactivating my poetic side!

[Aurum]

Aww, I always did love stories like these. Very enjoyable.

[Spiritus Arcane]

I absolutely loved this!

On Blitzwing and Skywarp

Thundercracker and Starscream!

Only Pinkie Pie could draft Decepticons for use as Christmas reindeer.

[Brony Overlord 69]

I'm very sorry, but I've never really been one for poetry. The idea is nice though, try something else, like a romance, or action novel.

[recentteen14]

A nicely executed little fic, for being outside of your usual style. Now we just need a youtube reading in time for Christmas.

[The Letter J]

I wonder what Rainbow will say when she finds out that Pinkie somehow drafted the Wonderbolts into pulling her sleigh

[Leftover of Saikano]

Cute. And now those will be my filler names for Wonderbolts.

And even if it's still early, happy *whatever holiday unitedstatians celebrate*

[Bookmark88]

d'aww

Faved.

[RoboRed]

Very nice.

"Well, I am glad to hear that," Celestis said with a yawn,

Really sucks that the 'a' and 's' keys are so close together on the keyboard...

[yayme]

[Eskerata]

I don't believe I have ever seen a Christmas-themed MLP story before (well, one in rhyming verse, anyway.) Nicely done. It deserves an upvote.

[musicluvr1974]

Upvote from me! Nice to see this... you should print it off in a Christmas-card-making program (whatever the real names for those are) and give it to your RL brony friends as a Hearth's Warming stocking stuffer.

[Straker]

Perfect!

[Swashbucklist]

Thanks for writing this; it definitely got me to smile. Thought that message in the last two stanzas will be anything but sweet if they fail to invite both of the library's residents, since people often forget that both are their friends.

[Darth Link 22]

This is pretty good, even if I am reading it out of season.

[ShadowLDrago]

3572377

And not just Decepticon, the 3 Seekers and an insane Triple Changer, those are so my filler names for some of the Wonderbolts.

And believe or not

this is what they say

Pinkie's brillant smile

grew three sizes that day!

A Grinch reference. Clever. Very clever.

[noobelite]

that was nice and completely uncharacteristic of you. I enjoyed, however, the entire story I was waiting for the big joke being so used to all of your stories.

[Alchemystudent]

I sai I needed to do in this vid here.

Merry Christmas.

[Matthewl419]

I did my best to review this HERE.

[defender2222]

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If you enjoyed this I strongly recommend The Winds of Winter