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defender2222


aka Mr. Chaos of the "Harry Potter: Pokemon Master Series", "Authors of Our Own Fate", and "A Man of Iron"

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Once every year
at around this time
a story like this is posted
done in a rhyme

Applejack experiences a magical Hearth's Warming Eve night and learns to true meaning of the holiday.

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This is something that suddenly came to me a few hours ago. i wanted to write a sweet little holiday one-shot that wasn't anything like my normal style. I hope you all enjoy it.

Cute, heartwarming and ITS A POEM! My favorite medium for writing.

One solitary error:

"I am not Pinkamenia

PINKAMANIA!
or maybe just Pinkamena. That works too.

My hearth is warmed by your verse, good sir.

Cute and heartwarming. That was just what I needed after a particularly upsetting chapter of something else that I read an hour or so ago.

Quite cute and nice, though I just laughed when I realized the Wonderbolts were the reindeers especially once they were being called out, also Starscream the Wonderbolt? For a moment the name was making think of Transformers and then roboponies and then robots hiding as ponies.

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That is literally the only joke in the entire story and the only reason it is there is because 1) it's pinkie and 2) They never really named any of the Wonderbolts save a few and I needed 8 names.

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It works though now I'm starting to imagine roboponies coloured like Starscream.

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I did establish in TMSOoS that in one world there are Applebots and Tiaracons

HNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNG! I LOVE IT! AND THE TRANSFORMER WONDERBOLTS! AWESOME!:pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy:

This actually just inspired me to write a little poetic verse myself! I've published it just now. Thanks for reactivating my poetic side!:yay::yay:

Aww, I always did love stories like these. Very enjoyable.:twilightsmile:

I absolutely loved this! :heart:

On Blitzwing and Skywarp

Thundercracker and Starscream!

Only Pinkie Pie could draft Decepticons for use as Christmas reindeer. :pinkiehappy:

I'm very sorry, but I've never really been one for poetry. The idea is nice though, try something else, like a romance, or action novel.:pinkiesad2:

A nicely executed little fic, for being outside of your usual style. Now we just need a youtube reading in time for Christmas.

I wonder what Rainbow will say when she finds out that Pinkie somehow drafted the Wonderbolts into pulling her sleigh :rainbowderp:

Cute. And now those will be my filler names for Wonderbolts.

And even if it's still early, happy *whatever holiday unitedstatians celebrate*

Very nice.:twilightsmile:

"Well, I am glad to hear that," Celestis said with a yawn,

Really sucks that the 'a' and 's' keys are so close together on the keyboard...

I don't believe I have ever seen a Christmas-themed MLP story before (well, one in rhyming verse, anyway.) Nicely done. It deserves an upvote.:pinkiehappy:

Upvote from me! :pinkiehappy: Nice to see this... you should print it off in a Christmas-card-making program (whatever the real names for those are) and give it to your RL brony friends as a Hearth's Warming stocking stuffer. :yay:

Perfect!:heart::pinkiesmile::yay::ajsmug::rainbowkiss::raritystarry::twilightsmile:

Thanks for writing this; it definitely got me to smile. Thought that message in the last two stanzas will be anything but sweet if they fail to invite both of the library's residents, since people often forget that both are their friends.

This is pretty good, even if I am reading it out of season.

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And not just Decepticon, the 3 Seekers and an insane Triple Changer, those are so my filler names for some of the Wonderbolts.

And believe or not

this is what they say

Pinkie's brillant smile

grew three sizes that day!

A Grinch reference. Clever. Very clever. :pinkiehappy:

:pinkiesad2:that was nice and completely uncharacteristic of you. I enjoyed, however, the entire story I was waiting for the big joke being so used to all of your stories.:eeyup:

I sai I needed to do in this vid here.

Merry Christmas.

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If you enjoyed this I strongly recommend The Winds of Winter

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