AJ, Anime, and Ponies... Pretty much sums up my life right now.
Big Mac makes a bet that Applejack cant eat a basket of apples. Applejack does NOT like the sound of this. Being her stubborn self, AJ participates in this 'bet' but maybe doesn't realized that there is a point where somepony can take something too far...
Written By : Feather Pop
I know I know, its probably just a lot like Pony MOV #1... Just try to enjoy it... Please?
Its my first fic, so please don't be hatin'!
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It was alright. Kinda weird how AJ sorta snapped though. Usually when you're doubled over in stomach cramps you're incapable of opening your mouth. But then again, these are colorful cartoon horses we're talking about. Now I'm reminded of not .MOV, but this little thing:
fc07.deviantart.net/fs71/i/2012/267/3/d/applejack_could_eat_all_these_apples_by_mickeymonster-d5fpuod.png
One last thing that always kind of irks me; people always mention eating an apple in one bite. How would you do that when there's a core/stem in the way? To my limited knowledge of apples those parts are fairly uncomfortable to chew.
I see your cover page and all I can hear her say is "buy my motherbucking Apple's!!"
Good story though
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Wow I wasn't expecting positive feedback on the short story, so thanks!
And yes, the title pic is pretty buckin' epic
The story itself was good, but your horribly lacking in appostraphes.
There's a lot of "it's" where you've left out the ever important appostraphe.
Wow, great way to show how fool hearty AJ is.
3754353 although the core is uncomfortable to chew it is still edible so one bite is possible
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It is interesting with apple seeds being poisonous.
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Okay, so you know about the cyanide too.
This was ... interesting, to say the least.
Not much like Apple.mov, but I can see the similarity. Umm, good job, Miss Feather.
Uh... *backs up and bumps into Big MacIntosh* Hi Big Mac! Big MacIntosh: I didn' do it!
sorry had to do it!