The first step to getting better is admitting you have a hobby.
Scootaloo has done everything to fly from jumping off rocks to hang gliding, but just hasn't been able to get her wings to work how they should. Today however, is the day that all changes-when a certain rainbow maned pegasus comes to the aid of her number one fan.
Written by Vermilion
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Scootalove is best love.
Love it
Thus, the student becomes the teacher.
I liked this story. It was a little jerky and rushed, but it conveyed the theme nicely and, for lack of a better term, the FEELS! All the feels!
Anyways, great story, have a like!
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Vermilion: Honestly it was the first short fic that I've written, so I'm still kinda sorta feeling out pacing issues with something bite sized like this. (trying to keep short fics between 2k and 2.5k words) Thanks for the feedback ^^ every little bit helps.
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You are quite welcome!
For a first fic, that was pretty good! (Better than anything I could do in a first try...)
Keep it up, I await what is to come!
Saw this on facebook.
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Sage: We always appreciate our fellow service members coming by for a read. Hope you enjoyed it!
So nice to see a Scootaloo story with a happy ending! Thank you.
3569267 not a service member, just a JROTC C/2LT
That was sweet. I give you a moustache
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Sage: Well keep going, and you can in a year or two here, right?
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Vermilion: See, I hadn't even realized the reference until a couple days ago when a friend pointed it out. I haven't seen Aladdin in like 15 years x.x
3569686 if I didn't have asthma
I usually hate endings
But yours was fantastic
It didn't leave that stood hole I often get after a story.
Thank you!!!
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Vermilion: thanks! The ending actually made me extremely giddy as I was writing it. Just something about it, perhaps how it was slightly open with a sense of closure
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Vermilion: This is actually the second fic I wrote, but the first is currently on hiatus and is something I plan on returning to very shortly, one entitled 'Life Has a Volume Knob'
Fantastic work! I only noticed one error off the bat, listed below. best of luck with future writing endeavors!
"...to best convey to the purpled maned filly that she couldn't give her..."
Do you by chance mean purple-maned?
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Vermilion: Indeed I did. Thanks for pointing that out!
that was *sob* amazing
i need a hug
That's beautiful! However sorta rushed seeming and a little on the no real build up side, still grat story