Sweetie Belle discovers an ancient kingdom buried beneath the beach that has been cursed to only appear once every hundred years. Breaking the curse is a simple matter, under any normal circumstances.
This is based off a short story I read long ago, and I hope someone can tell me what it was called.
Sounds like a scam to me!
That was pretty good
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and that's why I always carry cash on me! but damn, that was a sad story
I wish I could help them
Mares eye's...
Put the apostrophe in "Mares"
Otherwise it is well written. I cannot help you on the name of the story you based this off of.
I found this amazing.
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WELP, that made me slightly depressed.
It's amazing how many one shots could be full stories.
Good job on this.
Surreal but pretty good.
A little melodramatic, and the beginning meandered - as in perhaps all that on "Who's that alicorn? Duh duh duh" could've been cut, made way for more Sweetie introspection to build her up more - though I can understand where you were coming from. Interesting idea, and interesting twist.
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Celestia also knows about the kingdom... she's the one who cursed them.
She doesn't tell anypony because she's Tyrantlestia and unforgiving and stuff.