The third and final instalment of my Rainbow/Tom series, After the events of the last sotry, hearts were begining to mend. Rainbow swore to find something she cared about as much as Tom had for her. But something is stiring, what could possibly be linked to her already tragic life that causes shadowy figures to plot, and for hearts to be re-opened? Find out in this final tale of the love of a pony and a man...
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Darn you! I been rewriting my first chapter over and over for the past 4 hours. And you just had to post up the story knowing I'm going to read it.
You're trolling me... SO HARD.
But I love it already, I can't wait to see it get off the ground.
Have you looked at my avatar yet? What do you think?
Also, if nothing goes wrong, I'm posting this thing by noon central time. So if you have the time, check it out and tell me what's wrong with it.
Catch you later.
~8chill
.....FUUUUUUU-cliffhangers.
I HAVE SO MANY MIXED POSITIVE EMOTIONS ABOUT THIS STORY THAT I DON'T KNOW WHAT THEY ARE AND I FEEL LIKE SHOUTING THIS, SO ROYAL CAPSLOCK IT IS.
299067
I...think thats good... 
So what you hoping for by the end? anypony?
299082
I'm sure many would go for that he returns to equestria
I'm hoping for this BUT I'm not keeping my hopes up just in case he doesn't. Not to mention he could arrive at a completely different equestrian timeline for that matter (E.g. Rainbow is much older / May have passed away or she hasn't been born yet.)
You have to try and expect the unexpected sometimes because the writer can completely take it somewhere else.
Still great story though :3
299112 thank you good sir
Hi, I've read a fair amount of fan fiction in mlpfm, and from a fellow brony I would like to say the rainbow dash/ Tom series is one of the best ive ever seen! You sir have a great mind of an author, I've read so far every chapter of the series and I'm sucked in, even tho i am a guy I cried at least twice when reading both My little dream girl ( which is my favorite fan fiction) and A time of sadness, I can't wait for each chapter. And how u switched points of view from Tom to rainbow and now back to Tom I like it, it's refreshing. So I hope you read this and are happy because u deserve praise. Also just a personal thing I hope rainbow and Tom are together again
but Ill honestly be happy with however this story goes. So I'll keep reading regularly so keep up the good work! 
You're at it again I see. Bringing forth the turmoil of your readers as the hopelessly follow at your whim.
You love it don't you.
Loving it, waiting for the next one.
~8chill
299540 thank you, so much. I'm so pleased that you like this series so much!
really, thankyou! 
you were not joking this is quite the surprise!
I see that my own dream of your writing style is coming to its full potential. I know I'm selfish
anyway I think that you have chosen a great new original idea for a story. the creativity it there, but I still think that you can get even deeper and deeper with the darkness and parallel universes, then again its only chapter two. As of right now I have no clue where this story is going which is GOOD! ( I think just to help you out once your story gets a little more complete I might send you messages about what I think is happening so as a writer you can see whether your keeping us on our toes or not) Thats all I have to say for this story so far. I can't wait to see what events happen next!
god im mad and glad at the same time i m mad because tom is back in human
world but glad that he is alive
so keep the story coming its to good to stop
this is amazing
i got first 
i wounder who it could be
303309 want to give it a guess?
Oh yeah it's back!!!
I KNEW the fire proof spell twilight put on it would come in handy down the road ive been waiting
. Who could this hero be though, if its not a pony im stumped
.
heres for a happy ending this time :D seriously lol the last one so so sad ive been in a depression since i read it im hoping for happines at the end
Can't wait for more
this is great stuff
and if i was having that dream and that guy woke me up i would get super pissed 
and im FIRST
you can do it tom! you did it once you can do it again!!
He better get back to Equestria or
I guess you can say that Tom has the "All-spark" now.
If you get the reference, you get
.
Great chapter!
Also coming up with pony names is hard.
~8chill
oooo its getting really exciting i love it! Keep it going!
great as always, still can't guess whats going to happen exactly, but I'm starting to put the pieces together.
car powers hmmm?
i wonder what he will do with them
I'm glad that some people are enjoying this still
Sorry to see that so many people dislike this one
Lovin the story man.
Keep up the good work!
Can't wait for the next chapter.
Fucking cliffhangers. Also, please for the love of everything that is sweet and holy, if he makes it back and anyone says that he was dead, say "I got better." PLEASE!
Uh oh. Seems Tom is beginning to doubt. Don't give in, you can win!
Loving these updates and wishing you an early happy birthday.
Also, I'm attempting to submit it again today, so it might be up some time today or tomorrow.
See ya then.
~8chill
Could i possibly use Tom's hand cutie mark concept in one of my stories?
You would get credit of course.
So sad! poor tom, he's gotta make it back, hes just gotta!
312912 i came up with the design myself and I'm glad to let you use it once i post it, but though it was my design the picture i'm using later on was made by kbrony so maybe ask him too? But i would be glad to let you
313160 Monday betwean 9-10pm as always buddy. The time is 00:01 and is officially my birthday! Need Pinkie Pie to throw me a party! NOW!
dont let doubt overcome you tom..yerh eart knows where it belongs and it belongsi n equestria with dash and the others..you know it to be true
Thanks man
amazing
story keep it up
i knew there was a catch!!!
You make a chapter early but it happens to be the one with the MOST INSANLEY STRESSING cliffhanger of all time!!!
you are clever sir, i tip my hat to you 
Oh and then theres this little jack russler, leaving us with a cliff hanger.
curses 
Love the story though
discord you trickster..lol you told the ponies you killed him for causing to much harmony XD
Go. THE ELEMENTS CAN FUCK DISCY'S SHIT UP!!! GO NOW!!
Man you are good. A deal too good to be true. Circumstances that could tear him or the one he loves apart.
You must teach drama classes, right?
Thanks for the gift (the chapter) and hope you enjoy the rest of your birthday.
~8chill
Whens the next chapter coming out? I must know what happens.
315970 now...
Now comes the juicy bits.
I'm assuming Con Troll = Control right? Just seemed like a
Also, I really wish they had a Discord emoticon.
Looking forward for more.
~8chill
Yay he got back.
But how much has changed since he left. 
Will discord return in a later point 
stay tuned and find out next chapter
My apologies for some muck ups on this chapter. rectifying them now!
There we go, My apologies guys, my editing process didn't seem to happnen to this chapter!
ENJOY!
YES!!! this was what i've been waiting for OMG
Im so happy now 
i can't wait for the next chapter man!