FEED US MORE! FEED US MORE!
I mean... great work, please, keep going

+= funny stuff and it almost feels like a sex ed video only good and not meant to scare the shit out of you well done

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Glad you like it. Sadly, I think it'll be a while before anything is added to this, if it is at all. The whole sex-ed schpiel is really what I wanted to get done with this, so anything that happens as a result may be part of a different story.

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Mission accomplished then. And much thanks.

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It will be right for me

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I finish reading the last line and scroll down to the comments and yours are the first two avatars I see...and my one thought was, "PINKY AND TWILIGHT ARE MASTERMINDING THIS ITS THE END OF EQUESTRIA AS WE KNOW IT STARTING WITH TURNING RARITY INTO A TOTAL DOMME!!!" Seriously, perfect visual symmetry with the story.

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Rainbow Dash is Rarity and Applejack's daughter!?!

This was a GREAT chapter! I may just have t read this to my wife, she may just understand the whole thing. (Seriously, it's been 4 years since I came out to her as a Dominatrix and she still doesn't get it, even with dozens of conversations, many started by her, trying to explain it)

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Much thanks. Glad to be of some perceivable help. Though, if it's been years with no kind of understanding click, I don't know how much this will do to aid in explaining it. I almost feel like I've given better, longer explanations for the mentality of the relationship in YouTube comments.

Still though, 's worth a shot, right?

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I think it's more the way you're presenting it as a bunch of pre-teens who have NO idea what sex is let alone power-play and related games, where I've always tried to relate it in terms of just-adult-relationships that makes it work better than I've ever said in the matter. I can tell my wife really wants to understand it, but I just keep failing at explaining it.

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Fair enough. Good luck!

I have to say, I'm quite enjoying the discussions going on around Rarity's sex life as much if not more than the sex scenes themselves. You've done a really good job of talking about the nature of BDSM, in addition to the depictions thereof. Nice work.

3498096 lol na just used the icons to show how that applejack and rarity in that chapter where some funny stuff

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Much obliged.

Bravo! This is exactly how sex ed should be approached (though perhaps less a bit of the practical demonstration, as much as I enjoyed it.) It's almost exactly how I'm attempting to approach it with my daughter. Shame and fear are never going to do anything but screw the kid up. They certainly don't keep kids from having sex; look at the teen pregnancy rates through the Bible belt. If you don't mind, I'm also going to plug Our Whole Lives, an amazing sex-ed program developed by the Unitarian Universalists and the UCC. They have great, honest, fact-based programs aimed at all ages from 6 to adult (we could all still learn something, right?). Here's Bill O'Reilly talking to one of the developers of the program being absolutely aghast at the idea of teaching a six year old that she has a vulva. Yeah.

Oh, um, sorry about that. The comments for a story about magical technicolor ponies wasn't really the right venue for that was it? I, uh, really enjoyed the story. It was good...with the...words?... I'm going now.

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No apologies necessary. It's nice to know that so many people are finding this story useful or insightful, even though I essentially just wrote it with the thought "sex-ed in Equestria, tee hee" in mind.

You have to consider though, some people are almost totally visual learners. A little demonstration every now and then may be the only way to get a point across.

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I'm religious and a conservative and I totally agree that the rampant sexual prudery on the part of most people who claim to be on the "right" is disgusting and doesn't actually, you know, help anyone. I had to spend the first year or two of my marriage to my wife disassembling her nasty preconceptions about sex that had...nothing to do with reality.

'course, when I came out as, not just Transgendered, but a Dominatrix, well, that was a whooole new bag of tricks.

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Sista, I do not envy you.

Ah, I read the first chapter, never the second. Again, pretty informative lil story you got here. Would have loved to see Rarity go a bit further with her "training", but alas, it was not to be...