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Karach
Just a humble software developer who fell in love with ponies.
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Ye gods, I did it again...
I will burn in feline hell for sure.
Great clop, probably better than the last one actually. And that pic is perfect
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I mean, it's twice the length of the first one... 
I don't think clop is suitable for dwelling too deep into characters' psyche (it's frickin' clop after all 
) but despite knowing that it seems I just can't resist it. 
Thank you, though I personally think I went a little overboard with it.
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I've written (non-pony) porn before... not to mention reading stuff by certain authors on this site... and truly, porn is not a preventative for writing a deeply intriguing piece.
Moreover, a large part of what attracts us (some of us anyway) to these characters in the first place is their personality, and clop is only enhanced when it delves deeply into prospective versions of the character's psyche. In short, the 'Why' they're fucking can provide an incredible amount of help to the 'How'... or it can ruin it, but that's a matter of the writer's skill and the reader's taste, really.
Well this explains Blueblood's behavior at the gala.
me likey. me likey alot!
I am almost disappointed that you did not recreate the scene where AJ essentially confesses to RD and Pinkie Pie when she says something like "some of us do it quietly" so we could see it from the other point of view. I am sure you could make it worthwhile and probably really funny.
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Sure does, doesn't it?
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Thankies.
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). The scene was much lighter than the ending AJ and Rarity chose for themselves (yeah, writing about ponies is a constant battle between them doing what they like and me trying to force them to behave 
) and I don't think I could insert it without ruining the overall mood of the story (there is one, right? ... Right?).
Actually, I thought about it, but ultimately decided against it (especially since 'quietly' meant Rarity cheating with a spell
Perhaps the decision was wrong.
To quote Miss Pinkie Pie "Ah ha I knew it!"
nice job, although the last sentence was kind of eh
, but honestly that's like as small as an ant compared to the rest of the story. so go ahead and give yourself a pat on the back for a job well done! 
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If I got a pat on the back for every clop I've written, I would have been patted 2 (two! 
) whole times by now. 
Thank you.
I imagine that during all this, Twilight and Fluttershy are probably reading a book on desert fauna together or something. And Spike's in an armchair in the motel lobby, because there's no way he'd get any sleep otherwise...
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Fluttershy and Twilight, though... Yeah, I hope they found something fun to do... 
Spike surely sneaked out into the dessert to steal a few more turquoises from Little Strongheart.
Good gravy!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Great balls of fire!!!!!!!!!!! By sleipnir's eight horseshoes!!!!!!!!! Other expletives!!!!!!!!!
It all makes sense
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Taking all bets on the no doubt eventual third part of this tale! Who comes on to who? Does Fluttershy/Twilight have any fetishes that come out durring their night together?
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), I can't seem to make up ANY believable reason for them to seek comfort in each other's hooves.
Actually, as much as I've been thinking about it (again and again
Fluttershy is simply too shy to admit that kinds of feelings (thus, she would rather satisfy herself if need be
), plus, I don't think she and Twilight would be a good match. I can't feel any of the chemistry in FlutterLight that's so abundant in RainbowPie and RariJack. 
Besides, as far as Twilight is concerned, she would rather read a good book.
Wonder what Spike was doing on that fateful night, though... Had he overheard Rarity and Applejack? Had he, perhaps, felt betrayed, seeking solace in a pony not engrossed in reading a book? What would have happened if he visited a shy pegasus, so enamored with baby dragons?
...
HRNG... Gotta stop thinking about it! SpikyShy isn't even a good name for a ship!
4546860 Why not SpikeShy? Because in the end Spike'll be spiking 'Shy if ya know what ah mean
Wow, I had to read this again today. It has been so long since I read it for the first time and it is still one of my favorite Rarijack clopfics.
I am such a sucker for this pairing and both the plot and the sex is great in this one. Oh, and I just noticed that you've written a sequel?!
well, there goes my sleep. Hehe.
Anyway, great job and keep them Rarijack coming.
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A look at your avatar explains a thing or two.
I'm very happy to hear you like the story this much (Rarity and Applejack have so much chemistry between them
). That said, never in my wildest dreams have I expected someone to enjoy my crappy writing, much less to read the story more than once... 
Rest assured, there are many episodes providing fuel for the shameless RariJack shippers like your truly.
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Um... *Blush* I guess it does. Haha.
Hey, you don't give yourself enough credit. In my opinion your writing is awesome and this fic was fantastic so I had a blast, going back and reading it again. Good writers who like to ship Rarijack isn't as common as those who ship Appledash so I'm grateful for you work.
Good enough reason to write a fic~
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Every reason is good.
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Which entails that I move onto the next reason. I skimed the sequel to this and yet to fully read it(but read Crime and Punishment's comments and seen something about a battleship
But I the ever valiant Rarijack reader shall find time to fully read the sequel. And all comments pertaining to this, I really hope there will be more stories about thin walls and random sounds
I'm just gonna walk away from my computer screen.
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)? I'd love to know how I can fix it.
You got me curious. Have I committed a terrible grammar blunder which I fail to see? Or does Rarity act OOC (even for a sex-crazed horse
3560444 see you there, i have sway with basement cat, i'm sure i can work out a lesser hell of adam sandler matinees instead of micheal bay marathons or somthing
That...is a very good way to put it. It DID look good on her body, but not her character.
Do I really need to say it? On another note, too bad Littlepip doesn't know that spell, or anyone in the Wastes.
<tilts head><stare>...And she could not use that to keep herself from hearing Pinkie and Rainbow?
She will.
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She probably could, but the question remains whether she would want to.
On an unrelated note: your name is hard to spell...
Amazing again. I'm going to read the sequel soon
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Thanks. For both.
I wish you a good read then.