Dis gon b gud

Oops, you've got a busted italics tag in there.

This was great but your italics were messed up there bro.
Honestly I would love to see a chapter 2. That one being about them asking and everything(and possibly trying it :3 )

This really feels like it needs an extra chapter or two - one with the CMC trying to make heads or tails of what Rarity's told them, and one of Rarity 'showing Applejack the ropes', as it were - though perhaps not with as much rope as Rarity might LIKE to use, as it would probably be too much for poor ol' Applejack to bear.

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Ah crap, thanks.

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Another chapter/sequel sounds like a good idea, yes.

Especially considering that Scootaloo has some rather peculiar knowledge already. What was it, "mind-slave to a foalnapping pervert"? I'm terribly curious where she got that idea from, or if she simply has some strange fantasies of her own...

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Well, I can't guarantee the same speed I made this part with, but I'll certainly get around to another installment if it really seems so fitting.

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While that's a fun idea, I don't see it happening. Rarity may be almost unusually liberal with her personal politics regarding sex and sexuality, she does have standards, and intentionally exposing them to something so intense just violates her sensibilities.

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Funny you should mention that. In the original draft, Scootaloo had a line or two while they were debating why Rarity would hurt herself where she said something to the effect of "Well...it's not always bad, right? Getting hurt?" The situation got really awkward really quickly and she tried to play it off, but failed pretty horrendously. The whole thing made the story go on a tangent a little too long for my tastes, so it got removed, but I'm glad that little bit of character still appears even if it was unintentional.

3383336Like the story, hope it continues!

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Lawl, yeah, that's funny! XD

Unintentional, eh? I'll confess, part of why I noticed that so readily is because I'd been kicking a mind-control scenario with two particular characters around in my head for a while.
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Don't worry you guys, you'd be a little older for that.

a most fun read never took rarity to be that type of pony I figured it be twilight that be into that sort of thing( for science you know ) and I cant wait for your next installment of where's the beef?

why does it say complete? and if your making another one-shot to complete this whats its name

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Well, it's as complete as it's going to be for now. It's all I'd intended to write, anyway. If there's pressure to extend it after I've finished the October stories I'm working on, I'll come back and add a chapter to finish it up.

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1.) It's clearly not a complete story, so you shouldn't mark it as such
2.) There is a "On hiatus" status option for a reason

That said, if you're looking for pressure to finish this one...

*tosses you in a pressure cooker, shoves it into a barionic pressure tank, shoves that into the Marianis Trench, alters Earth's orbit into a black hole* ...MOOOOOAR!!!

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Jesus, okay. I'll finish it. Later. Promise.

Well Applejack just make it worse why don't you? This is pretty damn funny.

Oh, dear Celestia, I want MOAR!!! This is epic and funny!!!!!!