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I am running from something I'm becoming, but becoming one means I'm running from all I am.

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You wake up. You feel nothing but pain. You remember nothing. You can't even remember what kind of pony you are. How did you get here? What is going on? Who are you?

A second person fiction inspired by the Choose Your Own Adventure books.

Pre-read by Sethi

100% rejected by Twilight's Library!
(They don't like second person over there.)

Rating and tags may change as story progresses.

Chapters (19)
Comments ( 375 )

You patiently sit still for a short while, a contented smile on your face. You really weren't lying when you said you felt amazing. You feel in peak condition, better even. Like you could run up a mountain and not be out of breath. You are distracted by the sound of something heavy whipping through the air. It smashes into your left foreleg, shattering your knee, blood spewing everywhere. You scream in agony for what seems like hours, writhing in pain.

Goodnight, Patient Alpha Iota Nine," says the mare when you pause for a breath.

You answer her with screaming.

Was not expecting that... :rainbowlaugh:

I think I'll go with the third option. Also, you have my attention... :duck:

hmm, pegasi are rather lost when inside tight spaces, earth Pony might work, but let´s face it, you´re gonna Need more than kicking soon.

> A protrusion from your forehead.

>A protrusion from your forehead.

sounds most usefull in the long run:applejackunsure: since i dont have, you know hands and all that jazz

Eventually it is revealed that you are at Hasbro. :raritydespair:

I choose.... a protrusion from my forehead. Though pegasi are awesome, I think magic would be more helpful at this point.

I would be extra limbs on my back bc I LOVE PEAGSIIII
:rainbowderp::rainbowdetermined2::rainbowhuh::rainbowkiss::rainbowlaugh::rainbowwild::fluttercry::flutterrage::fluttershbad::fluttershyouch::fluttershysad:

Horn as it is by far the most useful.

> A protrusion from your forehead

>A protrusion form your forehead

>a protrusion from your forehead

Plz.:applecry::flutterrage::pinkiecrazy::trixieshiftright::duck:

>A protrusion from your forehead.
Hm... Interesting story.

Protrusion from the head. Unicorns can do far more :twilightsmile:

>A protrusion from your forehead.

Oh! This will be fun!:pinkiecrazy:

> A protrusion from your forehead

>A protrusion from your forehead.
dis:moustache:

> A protrusion from your forehead.

Magic seems most useful in the long run cause of warp and levitation spells

I would choose to have wings, but i perfer survival over awesomeness

>A protrusion from your forehead.

brighter light, upwards means the water doesn´t go there.

Upwards means away from the water. Plus, light usually indicates the surface

>Swim upwards against the current toward the brighter light.

Light usually means salvation.

Right? :derpytongue2:

>>swim upwards towards the brighter light

>Swim downwards with the current toward the dimmer light.

Yes, swimming up would probably mean salvation, but what if it doesn't? I'd like to see what would happen if he/she swum down.:pinkiecrazy:

we are almost out of air so the most logical choice would be: >Swim upwards against the current toward the brighter light.

Upward, as the brighter light generally means that the light is stronger or closer which means a better reward or a easier one. so I choose up

This feels like a trap:ajbemused:, but it is the only logical option.

>Swim upwards against the current toward the brighter light.

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Well... I wouldn't say trap per se. It is, however, supposed to make you second guess yourself and read through the entire next chapter wondering if you will make it to see the next choice or end up with the words "you're dead." Like I said, use logic and you should make it to one of the happy endings.

However, I won't promise that a logical decision will always result in living. There could be unknown factors at work...
At least unknown to you, I already know which ones will kill you but I'm not telling.

The key is in the suspense. You never know what will happen next... Frightening, isn't it?
It's almost like a sick, twisted game...

>Swim upwards against the current toward the brighter light.

If I were trying to drown someone I would put the grate downstream.

>Swim upwards against the current toward the brighter light.
Head to the light!

I am going to say this because a black book told me to, HA REJECTED

The light usually means safety, so I vote for going upward!

Also, Patient Alpha Iota Nine. I see what you did there, very clever.

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Thanks, I was hoping someone would pick up on that.
You are also a clever person. Have a :moustache: you have earned it.

>Take the dimly lit hallway to the Emergency Exit.

If this isn't an emergency, I don't know what else it could be...

>Take the dimly lit hallway to the Emergency Exit.

It's obviously a trap but rule one for any apocalypses/ insane asylum escape is to NEVER go to the hospital. EVER!
The testing area would be my second choice because I think of each hallway as a game and of all the games for each hallways Portal seems the safest.

The dimly light corridor to exit, in horror they Always go down the brightly lit corridor or on to the hospital so no don't go that way

Testing room the hypothermia could be very bad if something is waiting for him down the emergency exit hallway where everyone would go if something bad had happened...

>Take the bloody hallway to the Medical Room.

we wont make it far without medical attention:moustache:

The exit is obviously a trap. The blood in the medical hallway is fresh, meaning it's recent. I think it comes fron that vein, monster Pony. Not sure if it is hostile though...
The testing facility... I don't know... I don't see why it would have anything that could help. Everyone seems to go for the exit, but I am going to vote for the medical hallway

Take the bloody hallway to the Medical Room.
Or I'll kill you in your sleep:pinkiehappy:

>>Take the dimly lit hallway to the Emergency Exit

never go into the bloody hallway. Ever. This seems the safest option even though its almost absolutely a trap. So yeah.

Bloody hallway to the Medical Room...

"Hey man, i gots to know!"

I'm thinking either the Emergency exit but considering the faculty it might be a trap, The medical area despite the blood must have some sort of medical supplies which could be useful and I'm thinking that the testing room is a very bad idea so Med Bay

I would stay away from the testing area, cause whatever that Thing you saw in the water might of been a "project" in the testing area.

The blood leading to the medical area also might of came from that Thing.

and the emergency exit might be the safest route, but hypothermia will kill you eventually.

Hmmm decisions, decisions.

I vote to go to the Medical Room, even though the blood is slightly off-putting.

And definitely do the other races :pinkiesmile:

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