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Pump It Up


Dead, but also undead. It's complicated.

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They thought the day would never come where Applejack would get married. They also never expected to be guessing the groom.


Note: slight spoilers in the comments.


This story was written for the One-Shotober challenges started by CartsBeforeHorses and Redigar. I hope you enjoy!

EDIT: Not marked mystery because it's not much of one.

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Comments ( 50 )

Before I read I just have to say that that is the cutest picture of Applejack I have ever seen!:rainbowkiss:

XD well that wasn't who I was expecting at all.

3370533
Nobody was/will be! NOBODY! :pinkiecrazy:

At first I thought it was time turner or something. Odd but cute pairing.

3370553
Well, Time Turner was mentioned.

Short but sweet. I felt a bit cheated when it wasn't someone one would guess, but I suppose this way is still good. Also, if you won't I'll defenitly think about starting a sequel about this. So many possibilities! :raritystarry:

3370559
Nope, no ideas for a sequel. You can go right ahead! The only thing that I might be doing related to this is Fluttershy x Time Turner.

3370557:facehoof: Sorry I've have a bad skimming habit lately.

So what's so special about his eyes?

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I said "different than most." Most stallions (heck, any ponies) you see in Ponyville don't wear glasses.

You were right... I would've never guessed it...:pinkiehappy:

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Oh, and be sure to PM me when you're done! :pinkiehappy:

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Picked it! :raritystarry: I've been wondering when someone would ship Gizmo Poindexter and AJ, or anypony for that matter. :pinkiehappy: Good farm needs an accountant. :eeyup:

UVF'd

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Thanks! I saw the picture of AJ and thought, "I need to write a fic about this!" And I looked in the rest of my bookmarks to see which stallion (I already knew I wouldn't be doing a mare, and AppleDash never crossed my mind), and landed upon him! :pinkiehappy:

3370717 Was definitely a good pic, and could be a great ship too.

So Applejack refrained from inviting one of her friends to Sugarcube Corner for the announcement, then Twilight herself didn't bother to tell the guy she lives with that one of their friends was getting married.

Some friends, eh?

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Yeah. :pinkiesmile:

3370745
All of them were invited except for Spike, and Twilight probably forgot. She is quite busy sometimes. Plus, they just got told that day.

I figured Applejack wouldn't marry Rainbow Dash. They're too much alike and too competitive -- each one would end up talking to herself. :trollestia:

I do wonder if ponies would need a changing screen, though. Maybe AJ didn't want to be seen without a hat. :twilightsmile:

This Ship WHHHHHYYYYYYY :raritydespair:
somehow I can't hate it. Nerdy ponies need love too and yet I was completely surprised at the end. :twistnerd:

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:scootangel:

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Well, there was one in the Boutique, right? I can't quite remember, so I decided to put it in.

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Yep! Pretty much nobody guesses it. NOBODY. :pinkiecrazy:

Wow, that ending surprised me! :applejackconfused: I love the story line however and must say you are a very good author. I was listening to 'Today was a Fairy Tale' by Taylor Swift. When I read the description of this story it makes me think of it.

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Thanks! :pinkiehappy: I have that song on my MP3, and I think it's cool that you think of this story! That means it left an impression on you! Kind of like how whenever "Mama Rock Me" (a country song, don't know if that's the actual title) plays, since it was in The Sweetie Chronicles (it's my favorites if you want to read it), I think of the one chapter, and I can't help but tear up a bit.

Again, thanks for the compliment! :pinkiehappy:

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I know about the Mama Rock Me song! It plays all the time on the radio. No problem for the complement!:twilightsmile:

Gizmo! Nooooooooooooooooooooouuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu! No! you don't understand my shock! Start from 00:20. Good one shot anyways, It was definitely a great read! :pinkiehappy:

“I’m gonna give ya one last clue before the bridal shower on Friday: his eyes are different than most.”

Yeah, I actually had a suspicion earlier than this, but this? This just glues it in place...

Anyways, on to the rest of the story!

...And it wasn't who I thought it was.

Doesn't help my case that I wear glasses myself, either. :twilightoops:

EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

It's the ugly guy with zits?!?!?! Eeeeeeeeeeewwwwwwww :pinkiesick::pinkiesick::pinkiesick::pinkiesick:

AJ can do better than...that! :ajsleepy:

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:rainbowlaugh: Love works in mysterious ways!

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Thank you!


Re: Note: :pinkiecrazy:

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That was unexpected.

Anyway, added to the Slice of Cake folder in Celestia's Library.

Wow, definitely wasn't expecting that.

Approved for Luna's Grand Equestrian Archive.

3705563
Sometimes, looks aren't the important thing.

I'll kill him!!:flutterrage:

Good story.

4188129
Thanks. And thanks for faving!

Personally, I think the story could've been done better than that.

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