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After an embarrassing middle school incident you were left with no friends and a horrible case of stage fright for three years. Now that you're in high school you plan to turn all of that around. You soon find that the line between friend, enemy, and lover aren't as clear as you'd thought. Especially when it comes to this Vinyl Scratch character.

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Really good! But there is a point somewhere when you changed Silver Dust's name to Silver Spoon. Might want to fix that. Other than that, this seems very promising.

This is REALLY good. I cant wait to see more

Hmmm, fight on the first day of school. Reminds me of where I go... But nonetheless, the story is pretty good and has a lot of potential. Take your time and don't rush. For this you get five moustaches! :moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache:

Please continue, but please don't rush.

Liking the story so far! Although it's already feeling a bit rushed here. Just make sure you don't overdo it too quickly. :pinkiesmile:

Also...

After another fifteen minutes, introductions were finished and the teacher had just finished handing out everypony's schedule.
"Okay, everypony," she began, "My name is Ms. Applebottom. Let's all have a good year and—"

Damn you, brain! You... you traitor! :fluttershbad:

please sir, can i have some more?

Wow! I really like it :twilightsmile: I would really like it if you wrote some more on this story :yay:

Please, continue...and thanks for making the football players be the douches, good to see lacrosse players aren't the scapegoats here. Have a favorite and a like for your amazing work.

this is one delicious story:derpytongue2:

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Looks like I'll be writing another chapter. :twilightsmile:

P.S. Sorry if it seemed rushed. I just had so many ideas at the time and just decided to pack it all in there. :twilightsheepish:javascript:void(0);

My advice is slow the pace down a bit and you've got yourself a good story in the making. Good show.:twilightsmile:

I say slow the story down if you're gonna run out of material. If you can keep this going with more and more story... just keep going. Love this story already.

It's so BEAUTIFUL MOAR SIR PLZZZZZ

And please,


MOAR.

Is there gonna be anymore chapters I really liked how this story went. There needs to be more

WHERE IS THE NEXT CHAPTER

Isn't there gonna be more? I liked where this story was going

I need moar man im goin insane

Sorry guys. I just haven't been able to find the motivation to write this story...

*Sigh* It's a pity such a good story potential just gets flushed down the drain... I was really looking forward to seeing how this would develop... ;~;
To clarify, the story is dead, right? I hope it isn't... but from the lack of activity, I can assume so... it's a shame...

2957233 Yeah this story won't be continued. It's just too far from what I actually wanted to write and is just not something I'm motivated to write. Honestly, none of the stories on my page are so I might just leave this account entirely and start a new one where I can start from scratch and write what I've truly wanted.

KEEP WRITING THIS!!! This story is why i check your fimfiction every day to see if youve done anymore. I LOOOVE this story

Is this story ever going to continue? I was looking forward to reading it.

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Ya know...I planned on deleting this story but as long as there is one person out there willing to read then I'll be willing to write. I guess I was lucky enough to have two. So, yeah I'll be continuing this story now.

Awesome! But, you should never give up, no matter what

Seems like a pretty solid start, consider continuing this, please. It pains me to see promising material get thrown away.

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