The World Eater has tricked you. When you had supposedly killed him, and took his soul, he had teleported himself to a new world and took you with him. You, thinking the great evil dead, set off towards a small town on the horizon, hating the introduction I made you.
(I am awful at titles and descriptions. If your wondering, the name, race, and fighting style is never set in stone. Though, because there are some fighting scenes, [mage attacks are in brackets], {and warrior attacks in these things}. Unfortunately, I couldn't make a decent story without having a base alignment, so Dovahkiin is a middle-of-the-road kind of guy. On an unrelated note, please be constructive in your criticism)
My, that is one massive wall of text, might want to space it out some.
is fun to read but honesty it makes you look insecure as a writer to insert a player charecter and then expect us to insert a personality. good idea though. hope to see how it plays out
Being a fan of both The Elder Scrolls game series mainly TES4: Oblivion & TES5: Skyrim and most definetly My Little Pony - Friendship is Magic I am most certainly look forward to more Chapters of this story in the future.
P.S. Did I understand correctly that when you said that certain aspects of the Dovahkiin was up to the reader, was that by any chance your way of saying that we the readers can imagine the Dovahkiin as any Race, Gender Etc. From planet Nirn that we choose?
P.S.S. FYI for those who are not aware, Nirn is the name of the Planet that The Elders Scrolls Game series takes place on while Tamriel is name of the Country & places like Morrowind, Cyrodiil, & Skyrim just to name a few are the Provinces of the Country of Tamriel.
2549421 Sorry about that. I've thought about playing it out as an average skyrim character (Warrior nord) but in both my playthroughs, I am an Argonian/Khajiit mage. Trying to simulate anything that I have never experienced myself ends up in a total heap of erratic sentence structure and rushed storyline. Last time I did that, I had to make a new account because I was repeatedly PM'ed about what a faggot writer I was.
MOAR
hmmm, I think it's good enough to read the next chapter. As for the thumbs ups? ehhhhhhh......Perhaps if chapter two is good enough? Deal?
I like how you portrayed getting a soul
I play khajitt also the night eye is really useful.
Fuckin awesome story
2549453 i see where you're coming ffrom then just have fun ad remember that come ppl on the internet are just trolls.
mediocre.
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stop being a tightwad and just jab him with your green thumb already.
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Oh alright! since I'm not a bad person, but you better update your stories mister!!! Or I take my green thumbs away!!! (I really won't)
A small problem I have with chapter 1...the character almost drowns, which would be contradictory to anyone who wants their view of it to be Argonian.
2553756let me think of an excuse, hmmm, ehhh, ahh, how about, no... I got nothing
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Pinkie pie promised that I shall ASAP. (which isn't very soon in most peoples perspectives, sadly.
2553756
When you leave the water as an Argonian you still gasp for breath...
Argonians probably can just breath water but prefer air.
I REALLY hope you keep going on this, its a very unique way of wrting.
This is the most unique stories I have ever read I do hope you make a lot more
It took you a while to write this chapter I sense that you had writer's block
moar
I had an idea.
Why don't you merge the two chapters that came before this?
2630489 I thought about that, but decided against it because both of them merged would be farther than the 1000 words per chapter than they are now. Besides, short chapters never hurt anyone.
2552035 Aren't you that one troll on My Little Brony?
Fuck. Also,
"I am (Reptile the Invisiblessed), and I am an (Argonian),"
What did you guys choose?
2644552 Well I'm not just a lizard, but I'm Invisiblessed!
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yes.
Where is "STOP RIGHT THERE CRIMINAL SCUM" joke?
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That's nice
2935154 My hands are an enigma....
liking it so far
Got an email for this and jumped right to it.
So for the questions..
1.Buttsnare
2.Nord
3.daedric greatsword
4.Fistfight dragons (Made possible with legendary skills)
1. It varies
2. Breton
3. Deadric sword and fireball
4. Randomly shout
1. Anonymous
2. Wood Elf
3. Bows and daggers
4. Steal sweetrolls.
Saw this finally updated, do I might as well do something.
J'zarr
Nord
Skyforge Steel Battleaxe
And dumping bandit bodies in rivers.
"As he spoke, his eyes darted around the room, looking for a means of escape, which were two doors, one by the serving counter and the one I entered through."
Who's I? I think you should fix that. Otherwise, great story!
4585231 when I wrote this chapter, I accidentally finished it all in the first person. I had to go back and fix stuff, but it was inevitable that I'd miss something. Thanks for pointing that out.
Gage
Khajiit
Bloodscythe and Soulrender
Kill thieves
Name: Slash.
Race: Argonian.
Weapon: Ebony Blade for Two-Handed
Dawnbreaker for One-Handed.
Favorite activity/goal in life: trying to get the Windhelm Dock Workers to move in with him, and one day, ONE DAY! Take Shahvee's hand in MARRIAGE!!! ...Ahem
Dang. I was too late...
Name: Vlad
Race: Khajiit
Weapons: conjuration and destruction magic
Favorite thing to do: study all variations of magic and use them to everyone's advantage
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Same it sucks