The Decepticons come to Equestria to obtain all their resources. With the Autobots stuck on Earth, and magic having little effect on Transformers, the Decepticons have little to oppose them. Starscream is pulled out to a different light from seeing the planet and starts to remember how he used to be before the Cybertronian war and little more 'organic' insight of the planet.
Rainbow Dash however isn't going to let her planet go without a fight and she has back up from an unlikely source.
Chapters (14)
Transformers with ponies? Awesome! Keep it up!
very nice, i cant wait to see what the decepticons will do....
and then again, ORBITAL FRIENDSHIP CANNON FTW!!!!!!!!!!!!!
lul its like they use it against them
Not the best Transformers Vs. MLP fic I've read, but definitely not the worst.
Ahhh G1 not the shitty new ones I give a 10/5!
I....love.....it! You simply must add Unicron.
Now this is a crossover done right, kudos sir
63470 I agree completely! Don't give up this is an amazing story so far!
63404 There'd be no contest if they had to fight Unicron mate. Based off of the one generation I've seen, Unicron is the size of a planet. The closest that ponies have been shown to get to space (excluding Luna) would be Pegasi, and that's just because they have wings.
63775 actually i'm the the size of a planet in the sol solar system, called Jupiter...
Equestria is a bit bigger than planet earth.
here is a tip DO NOT I repeat DO NOT make ponies and decepticons get in to a war the ponies will get decimated (killed easily)
you need to add destructor he transforms into a TANK he could easily help the decepticons win but i don't want the ponies to die
also FINISH IT
Story's great, you just need to grab yourself a thesarus, beef it up a bit, and add some spit-n-shine. What I mean is to make it a bit more verbose! Don't just tell me about giant robots attacking Ponyville, SHOW ME GIANT ROBOTS ATTACKING PONYVILLE! I want to see the blistering fires devouring the homes of these innocent equines. I want to feel the bone-liquifing impacts of missiles and explosives. I want to smell the sweat and fear of Ponyville's citizens as they shreik and wail in terror! I want to taste their soul-crushing dispair as Princess Celestia, a Godess among ponies, the single being who can control both the sun and moon, is broken and defeated as if nothing more than a GNAT to these manevolent metallic giants. The screen is your canvas, the keyboard is your brush, and your mind is the pallet. Go fourth and create a MASTERPIECE!
One thing I'd like to bring up,
Applejack: Make her talk more like a southerner and less like an ork. "Ya'll" is actually "y'all".
You have great ideas, you just need to work on your conveyance.
hm keep it coming..keep it cming
Please continue this great story!
Also, if this turns into a Starscream X Rainbow Dash story= Hell Yes!
Will the Constructicons, Stuntacons or Combatacons be in this story?
your output of chapters are to long: you had one chapter in two weeks
very great story though
84518 I really don't want to sound like a jerk but I do have a schedule to keep. Also I was working on a Christmas Special but it turned into a disaster so I decided to just continue Stars Dashing. Next update will probably be on Duke Hoof'em story and this chapter tells you indirectly who he's going to try and get.
FUS RO YAY!
if you could geet chapters up more fast i would be foreever grateful.... but don't make the story to short or meany people will hate you for it....
great story. Although for a second I thought the the last line was "more to this now-pegasus that met the eye"
this is great I'm glad there is finally a chapter out!
It's Starscream! More than meets the eye!
I think I found a mistake but I don't know if it was intentional or not.
1.The now-stallion hardly had time to react and was forced on to his as Applejack pinned him down with her legs holding down his.
His what! We need clarification!
Great story! I'm loving this! Also I'm going to ask my question I asked earlier if you can answer it.
Will we see the combaticons, stunticons, or constructicons later on or are you keeping that secret?
Keep up the great work!
HARK! Succumbed to the weak, frail bonds of the flesh? To be mortal and organic is a fate worse than death! What cruel, sadistic thoughts were hatched in your head, RobotFox?
THERE IS MORE THAN MEETS THE EYE :D
108773 His back. That would be a grammatical mistake yes. Thank you for pointing it out and I will fix it momentarily. As far as other Decepticons are concerned, I will spoil the Constructicons the rest you'll have to read on... anyway, thanks for the comment and I'll fix that now.
Hmm....some of those lines..... Deathbattle? Starscream Versus Rainbow Dash? ....Hmm....
Excellent. Starscream's personality is perfect and the storyline is awesome.
Starscream gloating as usual I see.
I hope you keep up the good work. I love reading Starscream's interactions with the other ponies. It's so enjoyable.
its AWEsome.....:)
Great chapter! I also found mistakes:
1.He shook his head, there was no time him to be a scientist, he’d been doing too much of that as of late.
Between time and him put for.
2.But ether way, it was still rudimentary and he was would be able to get used to this like he would anything else.
Get rid of that was.
3. As far as he was concerned, Megatron thought he was dead, which meant he technically was no longer was affiliated with the Decepticons.
Get rid of that was.
4.“Um…yes.” Starscream struggled to answer as the hipper active, bouncing pink pony in front of him.
Get rid of that as.
I hope it is updated more ofter
i sense....good things going to happen :D
YAY THIS IS EPIC
Hmm...
I'm pretty sure Rainbow Dash said "Faster" not "Fast".
as for the story, interesting as usual.
YAY more frequent updates!!!!!
YES! NEW UPDATE!
I also like where this is headed.
O_O she rested in his mane...and closed her eyes...
WELL THATS A FIRST :D
WHY IS THE CHAPTER SO SHORT??? AND SO AWESOME???
MOOOOAAAARRRR!!!!!
Looks like Dashie's a little jealous about Starscream spending so much time with Twilight.
183736GAAAAAAAH!!!CONFLICTING EMOTIONS!!!
needs more chapters
They are screwed if they dont change StarScream back.
hurry up for next chapter please
hurry up and give us something
GOOOD
like, this suspense is killing me
But...but....Starscream's a tactical idiot. D: They're going to rely on his information?
D:
Oh dear.
AWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!
That last bit between the them was so adorable.
D'aw
D'awwwwwwww