It's been five years since the Rainbow Factory was shut down by Princess Celestia, and what information was released to the public, was heavily censored. The factory had been abandoned and, with specific instructions from Princess Celestia, still loomed over Cloudsdale. You are currently undergoing your first year in flight school. Your father had worked at the weather factory before it shut down but after it was condemned, you never heard from him again.
Today at school, your history class discussed the factory in as much detail as was permitted. However, today's lesson gave your classmates an idea.
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"H8_SEED" belongs to TheUlasht
Original Rainbow Factory fic, Pegasus Device and all quotes from them belong to AuroraDawn
Partnered with and edited by: auwest
I see some great things here and will follow it to see how it goes
O.o im at the edge of my seat! I thumbed.
come on
do another chapter ! 
I'm glad my first impression was good. Me and my partner, auwest are working on chapter 2 right now. Just don't get
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I shall read this once I am out of school.
Creepy pony is creepy.
Hey Lordcarn, I finally got around to reading this. Yes, it is me. I thumbed.
Thank you everyone who has viewed, liked, and commented on the story. Sorry I havn't posted another chapter in awhile. I plan on getting the next one up soon.
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Upload more of the chapters, or Derpy gets it
Hey everyone, it's me. I've been busy all week with finals in school. But I'm done now, and should be able to post another chapter soon
AWWWWW SHITT!!!
Reaction?
Damn...
This is starting to get depressing...
When he said you could go up or down stairs, it made me think of the blue or red pill Scene from the Matrix.
I see somepony who is paying attention.
i love this story so far, interesting but short, anyways, this actually get us deeper into the secrets of the factory, maybe we can find out what happened to scootaloo? who knows
CRUSH. KILL. DESTROY. SWAG.
No one care what you think
2962128 Stay outta my shed!
2917829 http://www.fimfiction.net/story/68356/pegasus-device
Aurora dawns continuation but this is very good as well.
3015880 The story I am writing is set in the time period after Aurora' s continuation. I have read both,
and it had inspired me to write this. Unfortunately, I cannot go into more detail as to how it is after Pegasus Device due to plot elements. I do appreciate the positive comment though.
amazing! I loved it!
Wow just wow (more like fail)
500 views!!! Thank you everyone for coming to read this story!
Fuck, that guy's freaking insane.
I
this story!! It's different from other insert yourself stories, were the chose your gender and crap like that. Anyway, RUN ME!!!!!! RUN!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Scootaloo...
DUN DUNN DUUUN
Well...I think it was better than the original. If I´m completely honest, i never liked that much stuff like Rainbow Factory or Cupcakes.
I haven't read this yet, but it does sound quite interesting. What the hell, I'll give it a shot.
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looks really good. I'll give it a read.
i like how the reader becomes the mane character
were u mentioning the youtubers from the music video?
im getting way to excited of whats gonna happen next
Nice story keep it up!!
Rainbow Dash is possessed by dark magic? That explains a lot.
Oh shit lemme guess were gonna hear the song rainbow factory
Shit getting real here
Ohhhh this is getting good!!
4324024 Glad you like it, and that you somehow found it. I really don't understand where all the random people come from. I havn't posted anything in a while so I'm rather confused. (How did you find it the curiosity is killing me)
3633759 I enjoy an enthusiastic reader! I'm Working on the next chapter right now... like seriously right now...
AND TO ANYONE ELSE I greatly appreciate the support many of you have given me by writing just a simple few words. It inspires me to continue what I'm doing.
4330224 I was looking around for a rainbow factory story and then BAM this great story caught my eye.
And I always thought that Dr. Atmosphere was an okay guy. Wow, this chapter really changes things.