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Hmm, how riveting. I had not expected for someone to advertise their story on a grimdark, least of all, Cheerilee's Garden. By the way, I would not recommend that, friend; some authors don't appreciate when others use their works' popularity for the sake of their own story advocation.

That being said, your story has certanly piqued my interest. I'm always happy to help a fledgeling writer. (Even though I have no stories to my name as of yet) I'll be sure to give it a read and constructive criticism sometime.

Adieu!