• Member Since 10th Apr, 2012
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Teush


Just another down to earth drunkard.

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Without a name, without an identity, without a place to call home. He traveled. He traveled everywhere he was needed. He dealt with a problem and left. Taking nothing in exchange but a next train ticket. Without acknowledgement, without fame. Some called him The Solver, some were too scared to even call him any name. But most called him what he really was: The Traveler.
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First time writing, mostly while drunk, so some things might be off, some not readable. If so, please tell me.
The human world in the story is steampunk-styled, with magic, steam-powered machines, victorian society and all that stuff.
Tags and rating may change during writing. Just sayin'.

Chapters (4)
Comments ( 7 )

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"The ones holding spears, white-furred HUMANOID abominations, clad in golden armour, with stumps resembling hooves instead of feet."
I know it's just one word, but a crucial word.

He should just not help them from what i read exactly ponies started it by trying to get rid of them, ponies are in the wrong and now they want help from the one being apart of a race they wanted to destroy.

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You're right, didn't think about that. Will do some rewritin'.

endangering their daily lifes.

Should be "lives".

There is not enough werewolf hunters

Should be "are" or "aren't" (if you nix the "not" in the instance of the latter).
Just two grammatical things I noticed when reading the chapter.

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