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Twinkletail


I write poni. I am easily distracted. I like Oreos.

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Hey, I'm sure he didn't live with Pinkie for that long without picking up some tricks! :derpytongue2:

:raritycry: that is one of the saddest stories ive heard in a long time. well done. :pinkiesad2:

My feels, let me show you them cause there all over the floor. :pinkiesad2: I just hope the hydra doesn't eat him or something.

Wow.

That... Wow.

~Skeeter The Lurker

nice one shot here, good read.

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I'm more concerned about him devouring Fluttershy's animal friends.

3291370 You leaved Skeeter without words :applejackconfused:...

MUST. READ. NOW:flutterrage:

But..... But..... Why can't Fluttershy just take him?:fluttershysad:

I found this VERY similar to this story...

Saying Good-Bye

EXTREMELY similar :ajbemused:

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Can't say I'd heard of it. I was just working with a prompt a friend gave me!

Hey, I'm the chap who wrote "Saying Good-Bye," the story biker_dash pointed out. After reading the fic, I think biker_dash's assumption at possible copying is unfounded. Our stories have similar premises and executions but wholly different voices.

Nice story, by the way. Very sweet. I'd love to hear your thoughts on mine.

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Yeah, I agree... just that it worried me. That is something that I cannot abide is when someone claims another's work as their own, and it just had me concerned for a moment.

Sorry :applecry:

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I'm the guy that gave the idea and I've also never read the story you presented.

3296359 Its all good... bound to happen with the volume of fics on this site.

It did come out excellently, and once my fears were put to rest, I did upvote and fave, because it did earn it.

*sniffs* I didn't plan of crying today. Amazing fic

I don't normally let out my emotions, probably because I don't talk with many people so I'm normally very stoic. But this... this opened me up... this was good. Thanks for writing this.

Ummm, how will he hunt and defend himself without teeth :rainbowhuh:

:fluttercry:I'm not crying, it's just liquid pride.

What’s needed here to make the story perfect is for Gummy to pop out a nice row of wickedly sharp teeth at the end. It would show that one, he’ll be able to survive in the wild, and two, that his gentleness and restraint had been voluntary the whole time. It would also be a nice silly surprise at the end of a sad tale.

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