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A Wonderbolt cadet writes to their father from the academy.

Written for One-Shotober.

First Published
27th Oct 2013
Last Modified
27th Oct 2013
#1 · 173w, 18h ago · · ·

Didn't see that coming..

#2 · 173w, 17h ago · · ·

Huh.  I never really pictured Snowflake to be like that.  Although my headcanon is considerably different, I'd like to know how you came up with this tragic backstory for him. :duck:

Beyond that, well, this is alright.  Although to be honest, it doesn't really feel like a one-shot so much as a fragment of a larger story taken out of context.  If you plan on revisiting this idea and expanding upon it, I'd greatly look forward to that. :raritywink:

#3 · 173w, 16h ago · · ·

Haha!

Wasn't expecting that!  Well done, man!  VERY well done!

~Skeeter The Lurker

#4 · 173w, 11h ago · · ·

It has come to the point where I can just like any story twinkletail wrote, before even reading it, because in the end the outcome is the same.

#5 · 173w, 5h ago · · ·

So that's why Snowflake looks like a military guy like that. Makes sense.

#6 · 172w, 5d ago · · ·

>>3406103 You and me both! I'm wracking my brain to try and find something Metool hasn't already said but I think he beat me to all of it.

I like it as a one shot though. To me a one shot can still be part of a larger piece and still be very satisfying and appealing :twilightsmile:

#7 · 144w, 5d ago · · ·

I knew which one it was right from the get-go.  :scootangel:

#8 · 70w, 1d ago · · ·

Was expecting Featherweight because that's a peice of fanon, I believe, but damn, that was great.

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