Fluttershy made a peanut butter and banana sandwich. Rarity would like a bite of it.
Inspired by Mick Foley.
Thanks to Skeeter The Lurker and DbzOrDie for prereading.
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Twinkletail
I write poni. I am easily distracted. I like Oreos.
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meh, needs incomplete tag
For loss of sandwich! This should be a sad, sad tale of woe and misery!
Quite the little tale.
Not bad at all.
~Skeeter The Lurker
I approve of this. It's exactly the way I hoped the story would pan out.
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This gave me laughs, and gave me feels. I mourned the loss of that sandwich right along with Fluttershy. Er.. wait.. actually, the description says Fluttershy, and it's definitely a shy pegasus, but the story doesn't make that clear. Sweet. My OC just slotted into that role, in my head. Nice.
I agree with Dbz. This should just be the start Twinkle.
It's good, and I like it.
The sandwich of desire! Fluttershy sure worries about everything lol
That was brilliant. Indirect kiss! Wonderful imagery for such a simple object.
Question: was the sandwich grilled? Grilled peanut butter and banana sandwich.
If not... into the trash with you.
Never in my days have I seen a sandwich overthought this much. Loved it!
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There would be hundreds of times more overthinking if it were Twilight's sandwich.
That must have been the best sandwich in the world.
3263660 She'd have to make a list:
1) Make list about Sandwich.
2) Decide on what kind of Sandwich to be eaten.
3) Profit!!!
4)Choose bread and ingredients.
4b) Assemble
Avengersbread and ingredients.5) Calculate mathematically ideal bread to ingredient ratio. (Note to self, include diagram detailing exact placement of ingredients in question.)
6) Apply ingredients to bread.
6b) Apply second piece of bread to ingredient covered bread.
7) Eat sandwich according to Sandwich Eating Protocol #12.
8) Write Friendship Report to Princess Celestia detailing what I learned from eating the sandwich.
I don't know what just happened, other than the fact that Fluttershy likes Rarity, Fluttershy made a banana and peanut butter sandwich, Rarity bit the part where Fluttershy bit, and spas.
That's kinda it.
I have no idea how something so simple as a story about Fluttershy making a sandwich and Rarity wanting a bite could possibly be this beautiful.
You, sir prove your excellence once again. 5/5
10/10 read it twice
one for the sandwich, one for the flarity
nice story.. this site needs more Flarity
3261702 yeah, it does
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can someone make a story about this?
3269800 Dear Princess Celestia,
Today I learned that friendships are like sandwiches. No two sandwiches are alike and not all sandwiches are for all people. And they don't have to be perfect to be enjoyed.
Your Faithful Student,
Twilight Sparkle
3272561 You sir win an internet and some complimentary moustaches.
This.
This is my purpose in life.
I now know what I must do.
I don't care for bananas but the flairity
WHERE IS THE REST
Just one thing:
The implied recent-ness feels contradicted by this later on:
I don't reject the idea that it could be just me.
As a stylistic exercise and fluffy quickie, it was a pleasure to read. There's not really much else to say given the little you said; I rather liked it, and thanks for sharing.
question, what does this have to do with Mick Foley?
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Haha, I was hoping someone would ask that.
It's inspired by something in one of his novels...I can't remember if it was Tietam Brown or Scooter. But this was an homage to a scene from whichever it was, where the main character has this exact interaction with the girl he's crushing on. I changed some things obviously (and not just the characters
), but for the most part it's the same kind of situation.
5899181 Well, I like this story, considering I am a big Mick Foley fan, this is pretty damn cool
I'd bet they'd like to eat each other's sandwiches if ya know what I mean.
That was really quite something. A very adorable, heartwarming something
I enjoy this quite a lot, reason 1 is because Mick Foley, 2 is because it is so damn cute
damn it I always come back and read this again, ive read it like 7 times
I'm craving for a peanut butter and banana sandwich for some reason...