Rarity has never been quite right, but has anypony? Opal was never quite sure what to think of them. Ponies were weird, and that's just how it was. Nothing they ever did made sense, their games were dreadfully pointless, bathing was absolutely insane, and everything they did was annoying. What else was there to say? Ponies were just plain weird.
So why was Rarity acting so weird?
( A big thanks to Tsitra360 for allowing me to use this their work for the story image )
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~Skeeter The Lurker
Rarity's magic is blue.
3271687 ...yes. Yes it is.
3271696 Wow. That was quick. I was at the part just after the CMC talking about her "hoo" and I saw the box in the corner of the page XD
That was very disturbing... I like it.
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"10/10 - felt more immersed in this than any other game made by this game company!" - JoyStiq
I wish there was more.
But that was very good!!
God damn what's with all these stories that make me want to hold my kitty and pet her for a few hours.
Good work on this.
Great job! Very disturbing!
3271831 You mean this isn't the first?
3271869 And yes, that's what I was aiming for
Thanks.
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The Paraspite, who actually did a it of advertising for you, just did a really disturbing Vinyl fic.
Pretty swell story, bro.
Damn. Very well made story here, sir. You really caught me off guard; I didn't expect something that dark.
Awesome. Well-written, unnerving, subtle, and Opal.
A like and fave from me.
Silly Rarity, animal parts don't go one clothes! They go on animals!
This was really awesome but also really unnerving at the same time. Rarity's character actually really goes well with as a sociopath
Great read!!
Oh man. That's just creepy. Chilling. I loved it.
One thing;
Cue, not queue. Didn't see anything else, though. Amazing job.
That was pinkie-pie-with-her-hair-all-straight kind of crazy, on so many levels.
...Fuck. I'm actually creeped out right now.
And NOTHING creeps me out. I'm the kind of person who laughs at most horror movies and most of what this fandom passes off as "horror" (usually tasteless gore).
Edit: This part:
So... did AJ really take Sweetie and AB away before Rarity did... that... to them, or was Opal mistaken?
Great job, you magnificent bastard.
3273375 Hehe, thanks.
And kitties can't quite be sure about those kind of things~ I guess we'll never know.
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You're welcome.
And that's what I figured...
Like I said, good job on creeping me out. 
I decided to step on over from a word about this from theparaspirte as well. And got to say, this was a lovely and dark story. Wrapped just right. Bravo!
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"10/10 you fucking disgust me" - Gamestop
So, is this a lil miss rarity thing?
3274199 I don't even know what that is.
3274526 OOOOHH SSHHIIIIIII-
DON'T SEARCH IT UP! DON'T! NONONONONO!
Unless you're into masochism.
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I totally looked it up and spent an hour looking through a Tumblr page of it.
Lol.
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It's a tumblr thing/story in the cupcakes verse I believe. All of the mane six are a little nuts to one degree or another.
3275798 Sounds fun
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LMR blows, Jay can't into drawing.
Have you seen their fucking legs? Jesus. He's awful at it.
3276650 That's because they're pony-human hybrids.
And I like his art style, thank you very much.
3276080 In essence, yes, it seems to be in the cupcakes verse. So basically, rarity and sweetie belle are masochists, and rarity essentially gives rebirth to a demon thingy that wants to destroy the world. The other crazy friends are just crossovers with other tumblrs, I don't think they're canon.
I don't think.
If you need scarring, read it.
lilmissrarity.com
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I know what anthro looks like. Their LEGS. Make fucking Z's. I don't care if that's his style, it's shitty drawing.
Meh, i've seen worse. and cats don't say meow, they meow.
3283420 Cool. Got any links to share, because I would just love to see them
3281459 No they don't.
http://lilmissrarity.com/post/40833708027
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lilmissrarity.com/post/40759017402
lilmissrarity.com/post/40759017402
3284872 look, can it with the lil' miss rarity shit, please. This comment section isn't a message board, it's a comment section. That message wasn't even directed towards you.
3284962 But what if it was?
THERE IS NO SPOON.
3283493 Visit 4chan.
Yikes. Move over, Pinkie Pie, Rarity's my new nightmare fuel.
God... good story, but creepy alright.
I wonder what will happen to that stocking...
Oooh, creepy.
Maybe I missed some detail, but I'm curious as to why Rarity was trying to combine a shoe with a hat. She also tried serving breakfast in bed to Sweetie at 4 in the afternoon. Were the dresses just poorly thrown together garbage or dead animals or something? Her behavior change makes me very curious; I don't mind a mystery at the end, but there seems to be too little information to work with.
Still excellent. Nice work.
Wonderful work. Very nerve wracking without becoming overly edgy and an ambiguous ending that left me with a sense of tension but not disappointment.