For Colgate, it's just any other day, complete with scared foals, teeth, floss, gigantic caverns, plaque feinds, and an evil oral menace known as Dr. Cavity.
Just an average day.
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heyhey! Looks like it didn't go up at a bad time after all!
Se it up at noon here. Great story by the way
Edit: Oops, forgot to fave. HERE YA GO.
let's see where this goes sorren
This is the first Colgate fic that I've seen.
Wel
l done.
More! This needs more!
Lol.
I did
Hmmm...
Colgate's cavity killing daydreaming on the job, Twist Actually being in a story, and Diamond Tiara getting the living hay scared out of her by a maniacle dentist...
TAKE MY INTERNETS! TAKE THEM ALL!!!
A new story by Sorren?
Read!
Ooh! It's a short one chapter comedy?!
INSTA-READ!!
Holy fuck it has COLGATE in it!!!!!
So basically I read this before I even got the notification.
This story is awesome on so many levels. Probably the first fic I've ever read with Colgate in it. Also, major kudos on portraying Diamond Tiara in a sympathetic light. Definitely going to be following this one!
And I so want to see Colgate vs. Tooth Decay.
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Nice job, man!
This could be an episode.
This should be an episode.
This is great work sorren i can't wait to see what other projects you are working on you could be right now be working on the next part of this story but who knows
But i would say this is pretty awesome more of a action instead of comedy but still cool
10/10 = awesome
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This is simply brilliant.
Eheheh, nice one man
“It’s my duty, and no matter how vile, and how disgusting, I will withhold my vow to maintain oral health!”
Perhaps you meant "uphold"?
But besides that minor error, well done! An unusual choice of protagonist as far as fanfics go, combined with the novel concept (if you'll pardon the pun)... This story's definitely earned its spot on EqD. Have an upward thumb.
Colgate got me into dental Hygiene <3
Great story here!
You should make another, "The Return of Dr. Cavity(And Discord)" because Chaos mixed with poor Oral Hygiene is clearly a sign of the end times.
Unique and fun! Definitely deserving of an episode on the show. As much candy as Twist probably eats, it's a good thing she takes care of her teeth. There's more than enough here for a great sequel (Diamond Tiara and here date with the destiny drill for example).
haha i swear if i knew how to make animation videos i would start one and post it on youtube cuz dis shit great thumbs up
hey thats from Southpark, furreal i would love to see colgate up against toothdecay
That was awesome!
Also, I like your explanation of Colgate's cutie mark.
958515 Why thank you.
Well, I think I found my head-canon Colgate. A somewhat stoic mare with a very wild imagination. I love it!
Awesome read -- very entertaining.
I will never look at my dentist in the same way again.
Why did I wait so long to read this? That was awesome!
1107195 1, I have no idea, and two, thank you!
Excellent ending, and way to pander to the crow by terrorizing Diamond Tiara.
Faboulous! I freeking love this story!. And do you see the fave/ read later and follow bottons? Im gonna hit those right now.
