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Inferno demon Dash
Showing you the darker, more realistic side of MLP in my writing. Smoking, swearing and being a bastard, but that's nothing new with me. Got a cigarette?
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What's behind me?
Jk I'll check it out
All I can say is I have mixed feelings about this one
Another dark yet EPIC story..........
Nice man! Real nice
3215167 This has to be the most well written and darkest story I have yet to write, glad you enjoyed it
3215397 Thank you my brother, I'm very honored, I seriously put everything I had into this fic, I'm very glad you enjoyed it
3216442 Sure that's your attribute after all who am I to say that it's bad......
After all if I said that I would be lying.....
3220122 Very fair point
Holy shit bro, that was dark without the dark tag, but man, tradegy at its best!
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I'm very honored, it's amazing what not being loved can do to some creatures, eh?
on another note it might just be me but it's kind of annoying when you start a new paragraph but don't use speech marks.
other than that it was an awesome story
(PS. Rarity's a bitch)
3261230 It's the realstic emotion I want my readers to feel lol, I'm sorry bro, I tired hard and even had an editor, damn
Rarity is a bitch, hate her with all my heart, glad we agree on that
3321664 Don't have apologize just tryna help a bro out
and yes we can agree with that 
3323185 Means a lot, and
Another Rarity hater, BROHOOF!!!
3339789 YEH
. Seriously. I get why people might like her but I just despise her. 
Finished reading it, and boy must I say that it is the very epitome of dark and tragedy. Loved how you portrayed Fluttershy's inner struggle, how her heart got broken, it got really emotional. The "date" made me laugh out loud, because it went just so bad... It reminded me of my poor friend who wanted to go with his girl hand by hand and then a bird did...what they usually do xD God was he furious!
Still, on more critic note, while I don't see any mistakes, I would like to point that you should add "Flashback" and "End of Flashback" informers as the perspective shifts too sudden. Still a very good job, keep the good work up!
She turned on her coffee maker, making sure to check that the bag grounds was full and the paper cup was empty before pouring fresh grounds and washing out the pot, placing it back, she turned on the coffee maker then waited for the coffee to start brewing.
Thanks for the teaching me how to make coffee!
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Interesting name.