As Shining Armor stares down the barrel of the guns of war, he expressed his final thoughts to himself, his soldiers, and his enemies.
A challenge fic written for Emerald Flight of The Writer's Group. I had to write a story based purely on the phrase 'Pity the Rain.' This is what happened.
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Yes! I love it!
Please, PLEASE tell me this is deliberate.
My avatar can tell you why
Also this was fucking grand
I just...
Damn brilliant.
3209692
Crap. No. Thanks for that.
3209876 Dammit...
so beautiful
Awesome speech and then that ending line. Well It was good up till that point. Still going to up vote even though slightly disappointed. It was badass and that was what was promised.
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I think I busted a tooth on that tone drop. Well done!
Consider writing some poetry.
That was epic. Truly.
YAYUHS
Paintball gun!?
That came from so far out of left field it ended up coming from the right.
Celestia-damn you, you made me tear up over a paintball fight.
That is just... damn!
You need to find someone who can do a good Gerard Butler impression and have them do a dramatic reading of this! Because that would be awesome.
Rule number 150something
Scheudunfruade is not allowed to narrate paintball fights
Rule number 150something
Schadenfreude is not allowed to narrate Paintball fights
I think I just got tonal whiplash
6881903 Mission accomplish.
6882101 good story
That last line.
7767338 You're welcome.
Commence maniacal laughter.
6881903
Agreed! Dear God, that was some heavy whiplash.
Oh, allow me to introduce the two of you; Face, meet Hoof. Hoof, meet Face.
the Drama! the buildup! from dramatic and dark to absolutely hilarious! you ingenious bastards. does Shining Armor go into a deep and life reflecting internal monolog EVERYTIME he gets remotely close to combat (oh I'd kill to see inside his head befor a pillow fight) very good story
You can has review!