Twilight Sparkle gathers her friends after receiving a rather distressing letter from her mentor, Princess Celestia. She's not happy about the contents, at all.
It seems her friends all went on some magical adventure without her. And now they're all in a lot of trouble.
Sex tag and Teen rating for some crude humor.
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Ok, great story! But one typo I notice at the end:
understand doesn't have a w in it. But great story!
Um... I guess Twilight wanted to ride the Hepta-whatzit too?
priceless
Poor Trixie....
Had to do that. Good story, by the way.
I like it.
AS already noted the ending comment PRICELESS
That was so Twilight in that last line. Take an up vote and a fave!
I thought it was the Journal incident and Celestia and Luna planted a corruption on all 8.
PinkieJack? Do want.
Good story overall, I just wish you added more details of what exactly the girls all did, instead of keeping it vague. I know this is a good way to Noodle Incident your way through a story, but just a little more detail couldn't hurt?
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Poor trixie.....
All that for the punch line... yeah they have it coming but all for that punchline
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Good story.
I'm sure I'm not the first person to think of this video upon reading the title.
BUWHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!!!!
That.. that is.. that's all I can say.. this was.. this was just.. just..... ALL OF THE
So . . . considering Rainbow Dash got off scot free I take it you are a fan of hers then?
Minor correction, "they have sense taken it among themselves " should be," they have since taken it among themselves".
LOVE the last line!
Oh, and as for poor Trixie?
OUCH!!!!!!!!!
Because you are an annoying bookhorse.
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You know, when I saw that title I thought of "What Really Happened to Lincoln" which was the video the audio of the guy who was shouting originated from, and not that video, but then again, there is a disparity in the amount of viewers listed.
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More like I thought she'd be the last pony to wind up with a Get Out of Jail Free card out of the lot, so I did.
Okay, that was friggin' amazing.
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See, this is why only those chosen by the Cutie Map should go to their assigned destinations.
Fantastic! I laughed all the way through it. You deserve more mustaches than can be placed in a comment, but here's a few to start with.
Thank you for a great story.
Considering how awesome that adventure sounded, I can understand Twilight perfectly.
Also, plot twist: Trixie actually loved it and is contemplating how can she live without her just found soulmate.
This was great. This was SO GREAT and I LITERALLY CAN'T EVEN because of HOW AMAZINGLY GREAT it was
BEST PLOT TWIST!!
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She's actually the second biggest karma houdini (after Starlight) after getting off scot free from the Cloudsdale factory incident
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Fair enough
Just... Brilliant... Plain and simple
Best crap I've read in awhile.
OMG! Twilight!
Simply an awesome story, great work!
Haha, well I really enjoyed this! It had that crazy, over the top humor that is great when done right. Celestia's formal address on the issue was perfect. Some things I would have liked more detail on, like WHY they all went with Rainbow? But then again more detail would take away so the less is more rule applies. The end...I should have seen it coming but it was really funny. The fact this was a issue for the Friendship Princess in season 5 just place right into this setup.
Great comedic one shot!
HOW WOULD THAT PROTECTION WORK?!?
This is what Twilight gets for ascending to an alicorn: she can't do adventures in Equestria any more. Also, why is Time Breaker not being punished?
Wow... That's some of crazy stuff stored in there. And that ending sure was funny XD
Also: Poor Trixie... O.O
...and then they fucked? Except Trixie. Poor thing. She probably really wanted a foal.
Rainbow is the only one that escaped punishment. Sounds like Trixie got alot of unwanted attention with the idea the expert might be wrong. Fluttershy got sprayed by a skunk. A skunk whose scent incites other animals to become aggressive and won;t wear off for 10 months
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I have no idea ... but I suspect Discord is involved. :|
This deserves a sequel!
I want that trebuchet for my deck.
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Dude, I'd nail that fucker down to the bed of my truck and have one of my buddies drive me around town. Or put it on my roof and shoot my neighbors. One of the two outta do.
Yes, Twi's reasoning for being mad here is perfectly logical. They are all friends, they should do stupid stuff together, damn it!
XD
Before this story, I didn't think anything could be worse than having that fire rhino in heat from Fantasic Beasts chase you. Now you've made me think of how many times worse it'd be if it was a hydra, and you actually got caught.
In short, I've heard great things about you on the site, and this only makes me interested in reading more from you.
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Oh really? Where are these "great things" being said? Asking for a friend.