The last part of the smut is a little empty, feel a little rushed especially just before B came, but it's a good story and funny plot for sure.

Will be quite funny, for us at least, seeing luna reaction when she will finally understand...

Fucking Amazing!!!!! More!!!

The clop was okay. I've seen better, but I've seen far worse. Of course, the porn's really secondary the story itself, in my opinion.

The clop scene was well done in my opinion.

Also Blueblood x Luna, strange shipping, but nevertheless something unique.

i have no idea what to say

"Yeah, I even talked it over with her. Turns out she doesn't have any other sisters, so it turns out that she's like, your great-great-great-great-great-grandma!"
Blueblood had a hard time keeping his stomach steady. His grandma. His grandma. He just got done rutting his grandma's brains out! A second time!

Upon hearing Luna's words at the last sentence as interrupted in Blueblood's mind.

"Mmmm, Sir Blueblood? I hope you don't find this callous of me, but I am curious. Now that you have had your grandma and your aunt, whose loins do you prefer?"

I swear, if he doesn't faint upon hearing hearing that, I would imagine that he would react this way instead. Either way, it'll funny to see how he'll handle the situation and how he would react to it when dealing with Luna.

I find it funny that Blueblood had used such theatrics to Luna have feel sad upon discovering that she was once Nightmare Moon had me thinking of Rarity with her similar stunts, which that I find both of them to be very similar to the begin with. Nice touch, I have to say.

As for the clop itself, it's fine and shows a nice comparison between her before and after state of her alter-ego. Still, I have to wonder what is the meaning with Luna changing forms during the final acts of their activities, was it in his mind or did she really changed shapes? Adds a nice mystery to the story I have to imagine.

Anyhow, I'll be looking forward to the next chapter and see what happens. Keep up the good work, man.

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Those transforms were all in B's sick little head.

3393591 Oh boy, that sounds like it'll cause some trouble in the future.

Why isn't this more popular?

Really hope you can continue this