Blueblood only had one dream, one hope, one desire. To travel to the moon.
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Great story! Look forward to seeing more of your work!
Good story, but the layout and spacing really needs to be fixed.
I large wall of text is an eyesore and turn away point for most people. I hope you take some time to space it out more, I'd hate for people to avoid this simply because the first appearance is wall-o-text.
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Unfortunately fimfiction doesn't like my text editor. I'll fix it up.
In addition to explaining how Blueblood could get such an image as to infatuate Rarity and turn out to be kind of a snobby jerk, this was hysterical. Well done!
Great story. It was well thought out and funny.
Loved how you explained Blueblood's motives.
THIS IS BRILLIANT!
I liked this. I especially liked how you ended it with the transport.
While I feel that it ended weakly, it was the best way to end it in my mind. Ignore the controversy in that statement.
It just seems anti-climatic to me. Enjoyed the short story though, and you are number 1 in the popular section (Featured will come soon. I hope.)
How to Reach the Moon in Two Easy Steps:
Step 1: "Hey, Auntie Tia!"
Step 2: "Are you getting fat?"
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If I knew the answer to that question I would love to tell you. If it helps, the original ending line was "The moon really is made out of cheese!"
Well, I guess this explains why we never see him anymore after the Gala.
images1.cliqueclack.com/tv/files/2010/10/southpark-dp-moon.png
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And that's the song which got me the idea for the fic. Fly me to the moon by Frank Sinatra.
3646388 Which, sadly, makes me think of shoving fourteen year olds into giant robots and not Nightmare Moon.
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Could be worse, could be ponies fighting angels in the middle of ponyville of the continued existence of a world which should never be...
That would give me a headache to follow.
3646412 My Little Mind Screw: Being Miserable Is Magic.
gyazo.com/000de0eed0ffee1241e8c0cf8da0ec41.png TO THE MOON!
1. Annoy celestial or luna so much that they banish you to the moon
2. Suffocate
3. ???
4.profit
Show, don't tell. You seem to have done a lot of telling.
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I agree, and if I'd originally planned to post this, I probably would have spent more time fixing it.
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Oh? What made you change your mind in regards to posting this fic?
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Mostly I just realized it had been sitting around for a while and just thought, huh why not.
...lol
...I never really got sending Luna to the moon... Wouldn't she die of no oxygen? And anyway, its like, Oh, my little sister is upset and becomes evil because I forgot her. I'll send her to the moon for 1000 years and see if that helps.
3652036 She was imprisoned within the moon. Not in a cave, or on a surface, but it became a physical prison. She was the moon, forced to sit and be unable to move.
3652036 Luna was jealous of celly and didn't want to tell celestia
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as all the best decisions happen.
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That would land him in Yakyakistan.
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Get in the Eva Shinji!!!