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PonyPon
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Good chapter. It seems BlueBlood is now the prince maybe king of rutting.
Blueblood just fucked his long lost aunt...
Your first written, and one of the very few that involves Blueblood not getting it on with another male. Congrats
I must say, you do have a way with characterization. I've noticed it in all of your fics really. You make the characters come across as very natural and believable, even in such odd circumstances as they find themselves. Blueblood especially is top notch, (although that may be simply my own bias coming through, The Best Night Ever was one of the first pony fics I ever read, and has endowed in me a certain sympathy for the character), showing both some of his canon personality (the stupidity, or at least thoughtlessness in attacking Nightmare Moon) as well as a more positive side (the bravery inherent in the same, and his devotion to his sister). And I must confess, I am looking forward the inevitable, and most awkward, fallout of all this.
As for the clop, I'll be brief. Suffice to say that it is well written, serves it purpose admirably, and seems quite in character. Strange as the premise might seem at first blush, I could see Nightmare Moon making such assumptions about Blueblood's position, and what follows after fits right in with her jealousy/inferiority complex.
That was quite the read, probs for writing a Blueblood fic, a rarity to find one treated as a character and not a punching bag of sorts. Interesting use to have him related to Cadence as her sister, which in a odd way would make sense due to lack of proper verification as to how they are even related to Celestia and Luna in the first place. Quite the character in describing the sexual encounter with Nightmare Moon, to give off the essence of the cold void to Blueblood, which is something I haven't seen much in mature fics.
Oh yes, good use for the word "stud", as I had never thought of the term being used for it's actual meaning. Two thumps for being a little creative with that, although this does beg the question if Nightmare Moon does intend to mate with him to bred a child of sorts, but that's my thinking anyways.
Overall, this story has some promise and I'll be looking forward to see what happens from here when either Nightmare Moon returns as herself or perhaps as her purified form of Luna, which would make quite the awkward scene indeed. But hey, she's like a very ancient ancestor that is very distant from Blueblood's bloodline right... maybe?
Anyhow, keep up the good work.
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Thank you both so much. Comments like yours make my whole week.
The last part of the smut is a little empty, feel a little rushed especially just before B came, but it's a good story and funny plot for sure.
Will be quite funny, for us at least, seeing luna reaction when she will finally understand...
Fucking Amazing!!!!!
More!!!
The clop was okay. I've seen better, but I've seen far worse. Of course, the porn's really secondary the story itself, in my opinion.
The clop scene was well done in my opinion.
Also Blueblood x Luna, strange shipping, but nevertheless something unique.
Upon hearing Luna's words at the last sentence as interrupted in Blueblood's mind.
I swear, if he doesn't faint upon hearing hearing that, I would imagine that he would react this way instead. Either way, it'll funny to see how he'll handle the situation and how he would react to it when dealing with Luna.
I find it funny that Blueblood had used such theatrics to Luna have feel sad upon discovering that she was once Nightmare Moon had me thinking of Rarity with her similar stunts, which that I find both of them to be very similar to the begin with. Nice touch, I have to say.
As for the clop itself, it's fine and shows a nice comparison between her before and after state of her alter-ego. Still, I have to wonder what is the meaning with Luna changing forms during the final acts of their activities, was it in his mind or did she really changed shapes? Adds a nice mystery to the story I have to imagine.
Anyhow, I'll be looking forward to the next chapter and see what happens. Keep up the good work, man.
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Those transforms were all in B's sick little head.
3393591 Oh boy, that sounds like it'll cause some trouble in the future.
Why isn't this more popular?
Really hope you can continue this