Pinkie Pie has her super-terrific day ruined when a mysterious new pony outdoes her six ways from Sunday. With only Fluttershy to help her, can Pinkie catch the culprit, or must she relinquish her title as Best Party Pony Forever?
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A meaningless spark in the dark.
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3090430
Then I must be doing something right!
This is a bad pony
and who are they any way 
rainbow get that pony outa here! 
sure pinkie 
!!
Wheres chapter 2, are you going to make chapter two?
3090998
Course.
Be patient.
Thanks :3
Hey! you, the pony who sent that note to Pinkie! your writing is bad, and you should feel bad!
3090680 Eeyup.
I think I'm going to go Super Saiyan if I get any angrier at this Pinkie Pie wannabe.
Sorry, but this is required by law:
http://m.youtube.com/watch?v=uZNm5OafqLo
Pinkie Pie, if I were in your hooves, I would seriously go off at my friends for literally teasing me about how 'amazing' she was, and then treating me like a loser. Seriously, after all you did for them, making them smile, cheer them up when they feel down, help them laugh, even, they just let you down. I say, Fluttershy, take Applejack down. She knows it's hurting her friend, but she doesn't seem to care. Element of honesty, everypony. Element of honesty.
Plus, the Pinkie wannabe, as stated by you other fellow commenter, is all cash and flash. All she/ he does is give out things with petty money. Money doesn't buy you happiness, only friendship can make you happy, yet still...
Nopony.
I love you story, just pointing some of my thoughts out.
I'M BEING HONEST!!! I'MMA GONNA GO TAKE APPLEJACK'S LIFE NOW 'COZ I'MMA HYPOCRITE!!! HEEHEEHEE- *snores*
Even.
Cares.
Now, take a good look at the elements of harmony. They don't look so friendly.
3144021
All excellent points.
Except for one.
Nobody said this pony was loaded ;)
3144158 Muahaha... sneaky...
I have a feeling I know who the pony is.
3292765
You do?!
Has my clever ruse failed?
3292793 Well, I don't know for sure, but I think it's Surprise.
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But hang on tight, she'll be revealed next chapter.
3296376 I'm wrong.... NOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!
But I'lll wait.
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