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Jazz Night
Im a quiet person who thinks and listens to ALOT of jazz. I have a few stories in my head I would like to get out. Im a normal human being. Ummmm, im nerdy I guess. lol. I'll just stick with writing
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So far so good with the premise. I am sure you will get an editor soon or you can go to a group that I forgot what is called to help you with correcting. Hope to see more!
So far I'm enjoying it just some editing and it could be better. I wish I can edit but I can't sorry.
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Thanks. What can I do to make it better
ACHIEVEMENT GET DUMBASS. Lol
Like it so far can't wait to see moar....
I WANT MORE
ya play it off cool
WAIT IT SAYS COMPLETED
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO
3152361 Don't worry it's a series. By completed I meant like those chapters were completed. Not the whole story. I like to leave suspense for my readers on what's going to happen next.
Is there ever going to be a new chapter?
3164365. Chapters 3 + 4 will be uploaded by Tuesday afternoon. I promise. Finishing the final touches and doing some editing.
3172187 Cool
I like this story keep going.
Hope the next chapter arrives soon.
Noice!
This story.
It pleases me
Man, Anon has to have a severe case of blue balls :-P
lol
If you ever need, I am pretty good with editing. I may not get to it at times, considering im doing MOS training for the army right now so I'm busy 8 hours a day from monday to friday, but weekends I will be able to help you out.
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Ok thanks, expect me to contact you soon.
Sorry I haven't uploaded in a while, been busy with school, ill try to upload chapter 5,6,7,and 8 when I can.
3325775takeyour time,..............just don't take to long or I will have to get pinkamena to give some motivation
3331209 oh please dont
yeah, I really do
When update?
I need a new editor.
any volunteers
3466442 I'll try my hand at it,but I won't be available until Dec.16. School issues.
3467539 ok, ill be in touch
3468805 Cool and I think it's best to put your story status on hiatus so peopledon't have to expect much from you for a while.
I'm enjoying it write faster!
Lol, I'm trying.
But don't flgo fast you make mistakes
3472523 That's why I'm going to take my time "That's My Shy" . I really want to write more in each chapter and make them longer, but then also write other story's. So my focus on "That's My Shy" will be at 50% from here on out.
You gotta watch your grammar. You keep confusing well for we'll, and there for they're, and such. There were some other minor mistakes, but I think those are the biggest ones you should look out for.
Other than that, the chapter was nice.
3481177 thanks for the advise !
3472245 Congrats
Now this...this is what I like to read. A realistic relationship build up with a guy who has intimate thoughts, but has a good heart that allows him to control his desires. Also as a bonus...the "you" characters personality and feelings on matters are closely proportioned to my own. Hope to see more soon.
I know how difficult it can be to write sometimes when other things get in the way. That and writes block. Speaking from the writer who hasn't completed even one chapter of a story yet. 
Oh well...maybe by actually planning chapters, something I didn't do before 
, I'll actually finish a chapter.
3513013. Thanks so much for the wonderful compliment. I do try my hardest when I try to write this story. Before I actually write my chapters, I plan out what's going to happen and I try to make it flow as best as I can. Once my chapter is written I give it to my editor who tweaks and adds a few things. I say it's better to plan things out and then test to see if it works. Because it's not practice that makes perfect. It's perfect practice that makes perfect.
Hey do you have space for an editor? I really want to help you out as you keep making so many grammatical errors and this is a really good story.