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Your best bet is to get a proofreader. You've got pluralization errors and other small mistakes all over the place. They may be small like I said, but there's enough of them that they start to add up.
2992854 Thanks for the feedback!
Dude your layout is all wrong...But nice first attempt
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It's got potential at the very least.
2992966 In what way could I improve it? I'm really eager to get better at this
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Read the wrtting guide on this site. It helped me ALOT! And just keep writting. The first story I wrote was total shit, and even tho my storys are still total shit, at least the layout and punctuation is correct :P
2993374 Haha thanks for the advice man. I guess we all start off shitty somewhere
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You know what, Ill be your first follower just for the heck of it. I dont really have alot of time for this site, but if you need a pre-reader for future work, I may be able to help. Best of luck
2993480 Thanks I appreciate it