3472523 That's why I'm going to take my time "That's My Shy" . I really want to write more in each chapter and make them longer, but then also write other story's. So my focus on "That's My Shy" will be at 50% from here on out.
You gotta watch your grammar. You keep confusing well for we'll, and there for they're, and such. There were some other minor mistakes, but I think those are the biggest ones you should look out for.
Now this...this is what I like to read. A realistic relationship build up with a guy who has intimate thoughts, but has a good heart that allows him to control his desires. Also as a bonus...the "you" characters personality and feelings on matters are closely proportioned to my own. Hope to see more soon. I know how difficult it can be to write sometimes when other things get in the way. That and writes block. Speaking from the writer who hasn't completed even one chapter of a story yet. Oh well...maybe by actually planning chapters, something I didn't do before , I'll actually finish a chapter.
3513013. Thanks so much for the wonderful compliment. I do try my hardest when I try to write this story. Before I actually write my chapters, I plan out what's going to happen and I try to make it flow as best as I can. Once my chapter is written I give it to my editor who tweaks and adds a few things. I say it's better to plan things out and then test to see if it works. Because it's not practice that makes perfect. It's perfect practice that makes perfect.
3567141 Here's an idea to help get things running again: you could say that the mares Anon has met so far are entering their estrus cycle, and just go from there.
That's not a bad idea. And also I'm working on another story right now as well. So my focus is trying on getting that done right now before Christmas. But thanks for the idea, I just might steal it
3599537 I actually thought you were going in that direction, so go ahead and take the idea, just be sure to credit me for it when you release the next chapter.
I'm sorry I haven't posted things in a while. Been busy with Holidays and family things. But don't worry. I'm still writing chapters 7 + 8 and those should be out soon. JazzNight
CHAPTERS 5 + 6 HAVE JUST BEEN UPLOADED!!!!!!
I'm enjoying it write faster!
Lol, I'm trying.
But don't flgo fast you make mistakes
3472523 That's why I'm going to take my time "That's My Shy" . I really want to write more in each chapter and make them longer, but then also write other story's. So my focus on "That's My Shy" will be at 50% from here on out.
You gotta watch your grammar. You keep confusing well for we'll, and there for they're, and such. There were some other minor mistakes, but I think those are the biggest ones you should look out for.
Other than that, the chapter was nice.
3481177 thanks for the advise !
3472245 Congrats
Now this...this is what I like to read. A realistic relationship build up with a guy who has intimate thoughts, but has a good heart that allows him to control his desires. Also as a bonus...the "you" characters personality and feelings on matters are closely proportioned to my own. Hope to see more soon. I know how difficult it can be to write sometimes when other things get in the way. That and writes block. Speaking from the writer who hasn't completed even one chapter of a story yet. Oh well...maybe by actually planning chapters, something I didn't do before , I'll actually finish a chapter.
3513013. Thanks so much for the wonderful compliment. I do try my hardest when I try to write this story. Before I actually write my chapters, I plan out what's going to happen and I try to make it flow as best as I can. Once my chapter is written I give it to my editor who tweaks and adds a few things. I say it's better to plan things out and then test to see if it works. Because it's not practice that makes perfect. It's perfect practice that makes perfect.
Hey do you have space for an editor? I really want to help you out as you keep making so many grammatical errors and this is a really good story.
Well it happened...........I have writers block
3567141 Here's an idea to help get things running again: you could say that the mares Anon has met so far are entering their estrus cycle, and just go from there.
That's not a bad idea. And also I'm working on another story right now as well. So my focus is trying on getting that done right now before Christmas. But thanks for the idea, I just might steal it
3599537 I actually thought you were going in that direction, so go ahead and take the idea, just be sure to credit me for it when you release the next chapter.
3629394
Can do. I like giving credit to people who help me out.
3630666 Cool, thanks.
Yea man keep this going, great so far
I'm sorry I haven't posted things in a while. Been busy with Holidays and family things. But don't worry. I'm still writing chapters 7 + 8 and those should be out soon.
JazzNight
Chapters 7 + 8 have been sent off to my editors. It should be uploaded soon yay!