• Published 28th Aug 2013
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Thats My Shy - Jazz Night



You waking up in Ponyville hospital , When you meet Fluttershy, and start a relationship.

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Comments ( 34 )

That was fast. I'm liking it so far keep it up.

4052956 Thankyou so much :twilightsmile:

I see you took my heat suggestion.

Is this Done? Its marked completed...

4053327 lol yeah, and im not done with it yet either :raritywink:

4053426 Thanks, I fixed it.:twilightsheepish:

4053426 I also did it because I wanted others to see that I did have a story. :moustache:

You sir are talented, this story although there are a few grammar errors is amazing. That was the sweetest and totally in character way of fluttershy asking somebody(Pony) out and the ending was great please don't end it here :3

4053555 Still I thought you said you were going to credit me for the suggestion?

4053906 You go it:twilightblush: And thanks for that awesome Compliment!!!:heart:

4054448 So sorry. Let me add that right now. Please forgive me:ajsleepy:

4055005 It's all right, just wanted to at least be known for helping someone with their work.

4055009 Completely understandable. :twilightsmile:

4055028 And I hope you might enjoy reading my fic as well. If you get the time of course.

Yes I know the other chapters have grammatical errors. I'm in the process right now of editing them. Thanks :twilightsmile:

I started reading it because it said complete I don't like waiting for chapters... You really should change it from complete if it isn't

4055060 I thought I had already fixed that problem.:facehoof: This website acts funny with me sometimes and has its days. Ill change it back. But if anyone else see's that story says complete please notify me as soon as possible so I can fix it please. Thankyou.

When will this be complete, cause I want my Fluttersex!:facehoof: That sounded better in my head.

:moustache:Don't worry, the clopfic you want will be coming soon. But right now im writing a second story that is a clopfic to quench your thirst for now:heart:

Oh god I'd die of embarrassment Damn you pinkie pie still awesome story though

4216734 Thanks so much!:twilightsmile:

sooooooooo sorry for the long delay. Midterms and Finals have been a pain for me :pinkiesick:
BUT DONT WORRY!!!!!! IM AM STILL WRITING!!!!!!:pinkiehappy:
SO STAY TUNED...*dundundun*:derpyderp1:

:fluttershbad: Im sorry my fellow ponies..... I haven't written anything for a while....yes I know.....I suck....:fluttershysad:. But the reason why is because I have a stomach virus and the Night is down. Im writing as much as I can, but my energy is low and I'm doing my best and thats all I can do.... Im sorry, and I will do my best to keep y'all posted on the progress.
-Jazz Night out.

4615328 your loyal audience shall wait for a thousand days if need be, just please hurry, not all of us are as patient

Hello my fellow ponies, I have some news for you all. I have published a new story called "The Compliment" to keep everyone entertained while I finish writing the next chapters of "Thats My Shy". So check it out when you have the chance and i'll be posting the next chapters for "Thats My Shy" soon.

Peace:heart:

4765470 Ok thanks for the feed back, Ill try harder. And yes, English is my First language. And like I said, I'm learning as I go, so I understand I'm not perfect. Im trying my hardest and thats all I can do until I perfect it and get it down correctly. And again thanks! :pinkiehappy:

4772885 Ill message you privately. :twilightsmile:

Sorry for the inconvenience, but all my stories are gonna on pause for a few days. My father had a stroke and I just can't write right now. Family comes first, sorry.

In a few days I will go through the story and clean up and fix up the errors. So stay tuned for that. :twilightblush:

GOD DAMIT PINKIE :pinkiehappy:

That's one way:yay:

Jazz Night where is the next chapter for this story

4784792 also where is 9 and ten for this story, did ya realize they were too short compared to the previous chapters??

6624864 Yeah it was just a little to short, and i felt like i could add more.

Hopefully this story will be continued someday 😥

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